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Old 09-24-2003, 06:59 PM   #12
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Another thought (esp knowing you're non-English) is to alter the word-order in your Intro. I like the intro, it just makes no sense.

What do I mean?

Look at your sig picture. When it loads, it says 'Three - Hero - Faces - One'. That doesn't mean anything, since what you are saying is 'Three Faces, One Hero'. Even if you loaded one line at a time or something. Your site does the same - 'Hero Became 1995 In Man ... or something like that.


Dopelar effect (n.) The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.
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