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Old 03-01-2006, 02:21 AM   #8
Diego Varen
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Great Chapter. I like how you described the training. I didn't think the Jedi had a shooting range. I liked it when Jolee said.

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Originally Posted by Jolee Bindo
"Actually, I think it improved Sitorís appearance. Made him more distinguished looking"
Can you space your Paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.
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