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Old 03-01-2006, 11:12 AM   #11
JediMaster12
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Yes and you have done a marvellous job in brining Jolee alive. Every bit of dialogue that you give hime sounds exactly like something he would say because he's old dammit and e's entitled to ramble and ...whatever. I really got a kick out of the line that Pottsie mentioned as well the one:
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Originally Posted by Jae Onasi
"Actually, I think it improved Sitorís appearance. Made him more distinguished looking"
That just did it for me. It was like hearing Jolee all over again and I loved it. Good job and I look forward to seeing more.

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