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Old 12-03-2006, 09:31 PM   #26
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Another week, another CP chapter. Joy, right? Gah, I'm amazed I managed this one, I've been so didn't come out as good as I hoped, though. The fight scene in particular came out terrible...ugh...

Well, here you guys are, chapter thirteen.


Nereus is getting sick of waiting for Raz to finally break down and surrender. Meanwhile, our favorite campers and Lili are finally all set to invade Nereus's base and rescue Raz...will their mission be a success, or will they only make things worse?

As usual guys, feedback is really appreciated. I mean, seriously...if you're lurking and reading, would it kill you to take a few minutes and drop a comment? You don't have to, but I could really use the encouragement...critique is also, of course, very greatly appreciated.

Well, that's all. On to Twenty-Five Days.

“Raz,” Oleander groaned. “How many times do I have to tell you? You don't have to sneak in here past security every time you come anymore! You can just come in through the gate! You know, like everyone else?”

“Oh, I know. I just like this way better.”

--Cursum Perficio, chapter two, by Digitaldreamer.

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