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Old 12-20-2006, 07:35 PM   #103
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Originally Posted by Prime
Everything from the first Dark Nest book until now has been the same. And not just here and there. Does anyone actually proofread these things??
I know what everyone means. I wonder if Troy Denning is just a bad writter. Before I went back to school, I started to read the Dark Nest books. Denning has major sentence problems, and he is lacking a good imagination. He barely gets his discriptions out, and the worlds he builds are 2D.

How was Betrayal? I am about to start reading the book, but I might as well get a review on the grammar.

I know that I am not an expert in grammar. If I was going to have my work printed for the masses, I would take my time to get things right.

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