Alright, the first part was near perfect. They were both in character and it was sweet. Really, I was going aww.
However in the second part, Raz seems a out of character. I can see him being a little upset but then moving on. He doesn't seem like one to get deppressed over things. Also, did the game mention that Chloe lived in an orphanage?
That, and it isn't wrong for 14 year olds. Hell, sexual expermentation starts around puberty and girls go through puberty at a younger age (usually) than 14. Most of the time,nothing more than hand holding and a slight kiss. So if anything, Cheez was being on the prudent side of things.