This is a handy thread to have and I appreciate the gesture Jae.
I was just discussing this with Pottsie on my Heart of Deception thread when he asked about my archive edition of HotG. I know he's lazy but when he can, he does give a good review and ask about my intentions on where the plot is going. A good critique points out the good points that the reviewer thinks is good and the bad things say the weakness of a plot or the clarity issues. Athenaprime's guide is a good one to follow.
KotO[REvan] you emphasized a good point about patience on the part of the authors. People will read them but posting is a time issue. Just keep posting a new segment and people will eventually say something.