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Old 06-17-2007, 02:45 AM   #2
Diego Varen
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Join Date: Jan 2006
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Contest winner - Fan Fiction 
This is a great oneshot and it is nice to see you back. You wanted to know when your last post was and looking at your profile, it was this post. Too bad about school preventing you being here. I don't know if you remember me, but my name used to be Pottsie, before it got changed.

Anyway back to the Fic. I know that in books, dialogue is set out like this, but I learned that on the Forums to do a space between dialogue and description, so forumites who have bad vision can read it easier.

Other than that, I think this Fic is great. I'm looking forward to the rewrite of Return of the Exile.
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