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Old 06-20-2008, 06:44 AM   #184
MrBluevelt
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This looks absolutely awesome. Props to all of you for your excellent work. My only critique would be that nearly every line of dialogue has a grammatical error. That's not really a big deal, though, in the grand scheme of things.

Great work. Can't wait to see this come together.
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