Nice addition Bini.
It goes into Revan's mind and what he's feeling with this terrible loss. A nice insight into a troubled and hurt mind.
As for references ... I did spot lines for "Time of your Life" - Green Day. "How you Remind Me" "If Everyone Cared" and "Far Away" .. all by Nickelback.
The first line, I am convinced it's from a song, and I know the words, and melody, but the title and artist have both eluded me.
But from what I've seen, you have some great taste in music my friend. Great taste indeed!
Looking o next chapter. I want to see how Revan handles this campaign on Tatooine.