Is Revan Dark-sided, or Light-sided? I'm not sure if you've mentioned his alignment before now, though.
Anyways ... It was a good chapter. I liked the occasional cliche slang lines that popped up here and there. It made the story all the more enjoyable to read in my opinion.
Nice work, Bini. Keep it going.
EDIT: Didn't see the six chap, lol.
"I am the dark in which all light dies," ... this ... sounds ... oddly, eerily and undeniably familiar to me. I am not sure where I have heard it from, but I know I have, somewhere ...
Is this the end of the story?