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Old 08-20-2008, 01:33 PM   #4
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Thanks, I forgot to mention constructive criticism is fine. I think I'll X the chapter and just make a short story. I don't have to much time to spend on the computer so I cant right a whole lot in one segment.

I'll include the "start a new line thing each time a character finishes speaking" in my next fic. If I do one.

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