Thread: [Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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Old 10-12-2008, 02:16 PM   #18
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Bee! I didn't even see that this was out! I'm terribly sorry for not reading it sooner! I loved how you depicted the Exile walking in on Revan's shop, beating the crud out of him, and then holding a dagger to his throat.

I liked the action scene quite a bit, especially the "damn he hated being kicked in the face." It was a nice change to hear Revan's thoughts on getting beaten.

Great job, Bee! Looking forward to more!

EDIT: Upon reading the first chapter again, may I ask if it was Revan that assassinated the politician?

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