Thread: [Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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Old 10-13-2008, 04:31 PM   #23
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Ah, I thought it might be Revan in the prologue! It reminded me of Granta Omega taking off the synthetic flesh. (He's in some EU stuff) While Revan was surprised in that fight in chp 2, it's good to see he still has his wits about him. I actually enjoy the fact that Revan is not some uber- invincible, near god for once - he can be beaten, but can also take a kick to the face!

The chapters were a bit short, true, but better than mine that can't even fit into one post. The way you ended the second chapter was perfect - unlike DY I just adore cliffhangers.

I'll keep my eyes open for chapter 3.

~HOP



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