Thread: [Poetry] Burnseyy's Poetry
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Old 10-14-2008, 02:51 AM   #12
Sabretooth
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I liked Place of Ghosts very much, the environment and atmosphere created is delicious (no pun intended ) and induces a sense of melancholy and nostalgia. I'd almost label it as decent gothic, and considering the setting, I'd say you were very creative in describing it. I enjoyed reading it.

Thirteenth Day of the Second Month required some rereading, and I can't help that the track "42 49" by Sigh was playing in my head. One similarity with the previous poem would be the very good melding of atmosphere with emotion, keeping feet firmly on ground while giving airs of hope. I liked it, but I'll say that Place of Ghosts was the best so far.

Thanks, keep writing, I like your poetry!


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