Thread: [Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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Old 11-29-2008, 02:20 PM   #46
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A very interesting addition, Bee! The battle was hectic, but short, and, to me, was a bit blurry (but that might just be me, and my reading too quickly ). Nonetheless, very well done, I thought.

Bringing (back) the Revan-Exile Bond was a nice move. It could go either way, however, seeing as how (their) history is somewhat... rough.

At any rate, I enjoyed the chapter very much. Keep up the nice work.
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