Thread: [Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief
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Old 11-30-2008, 06:37 AM   #48
The_Catto
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The bond is interesting.
I'm intrigued as to how it will turn out in the long run.

The fight scene was a little bit short in my opinion but it was neatly executed nonetheless.

Another great chapter, Bee.

One thing though that got me ...
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Originally Posted by Bee Hoon
and she held on held on held on because ......
Was the 'held on's' suposed to go for that long? My mind is warped at the moment from tiredness so I might just be reading it wrong but yeah, lol ... anyways ...
That's my 2cent

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