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*Bee Hoon* · 12-04-2008, 09:40 AM

Late reply is late >.> Thanks for the comments <3

Litofsky, that is because I am fail at writing fight scenes

I get bored after two paragraphs and want MOAR EMO FLUFF.

Endorenna, I'm still a little undecided. We'll see how it goes;o

Mr_BFA, I meant to italicise that but was too tired. It is fixed now. Sabre objected to it too, but I wrote it that way to emphasize it and obliquely denote the use of the Force. And because I am thick and like to repeat things sometimes.

Next chapter should be up over the weekend

12-04-2008, 09:40 AM	#49
Bee Hoon ngom ngom ngom Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,268	Late reply is late >.> Thanks for the comments <3 Litofsky, that is because I am fail at writing fight scenes I get bored after two paragraphs and want MOAR EMO FLUFF. Endorenna, I'm still a little undecided. We'll see how it goes;o Mr_BFA, I meant to italicise that but was too tired. It is fixed now. Sabre objected to it too, but I wrote it that way to emphasize it and obliquely denote the use of the Force. And because I am thick and like to repeat things sometimes. Next chapter should be up over the weekend The sun goes down and the sky reddens, pain grows sharp. light dwindles. Then is evening when jasmine flowers open, the deluded say. But evening is the great brightening dawn when crested cocks crow all through the tall city and evening is the whole day for those without their lovers -Kuruntokai 234, translated by A.K. Ramanujan [Fic] Shreds of a Dying Belief Last edited by Bee Hoon; 12-05-2008 at 11:30 PM.
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