Late reply is late >.> Thanks for the comments <3
Litofsky, that is because I am fail at writing fight scenes
I get bored after two paragraphs and want MOAR EMO FLUFF.
Endorenna, I'm still a little undecided. We'll see how it goes;o
Mr_BFA, I meant to italicise that but was too tired. It is fixed now. Sabre objected to it too, but I wrote it that way to emphasize it and obliquely denote the use of the Force. And because I am thick and like to repeat things sometimes.
Next chapter should be up over the weekend