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Old 12-09-2008, 09:05 PM   #56
HIGH ON PIE 14
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I think Revan's and Exile's chemistry gets better with every chapter and their interactions are most enjoyable to read. As others said, a bit fuzzy at the beginning, but it got much clearer as I kept reading.

I have a bad habit of doing that too...I keep forgetting the readers don't know as much about the story as I do.
Two great additions!

~HOP



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