Very nooiiice, Bee.
Another great addition to the story and still with Lei and Revan, the feelings they share and the memories each relive whilst in the others presence is a nice touch and makes the reader (I, mainly, as I can't speak for the others
) feel a little bit more connected in knowing just what they are going through.
I'm liking this story more and more and like the others ... I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Originally Posted by Bee Hoon
“Heads up.” She sounded eerily calm, despite the despite the distant roar of ships.
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Is that another intent to impress the meaning of the sentence or a mistake. I'm confused,
Other than that though, didn't find anything else.
