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Old 01-05-2009, 05:29 AM   #942
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“A Wanderer’s Destiny”, Prologue & Chapter 1: Trisha’s Curse
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Set five years after TSL: A pair of ‘businessmen’ have a discussion with the Republic.

Crosssover fiction can have problems primarily because the rules of the two might not carry across. I have seen only one episode of Full Metal Alchemist, but the rules don’t seem to have changed much from what they use in KOTOR, so no biggie. The writing style is good, no major grammar or spelling goofs. But the work does need polishing and editing.

No that isn’t a ding, It always needs polishing and editing. Trust me.
This is WAY late, but Mach? Thanks VERY much for the review.
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