Thread: [Poetry] You tell Me...
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Old 12-07-2009, 11:23 PM   #3
Rabish Bini
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Don't worry I find that not many people comment on poetry.

As for me, I actually really liked it, it wasn't a typical make everything rhyme and sound forced poem, and had emotion behind it.
You don't really need to work on much, but don't capitalize words like "hope", "me" and "generation". There's no need to and really shouldn't be.
In all though, very nice work, well done


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