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Originally Posted by goldomenso
CptPriceless, your title crawl says "Previous JEDI conflicts have all but strained the GALACTIC REPUBLIC'S resources." I think you want either say "...have strained the GALACTIC REPUBLIC'S resources" or "...have all but exhausted the GALACTIC REPUBLIC'S resources."
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Both sound good, thanks.
But that writing is more of a stylistic, not technical thing.