3 things might be improved. The ebon hawks landing gear should come down a little earlier, Revan fighting moved looks recycled from K1, and you should get some original voice actors ( I don't have a great mic, otherwise I'd volunteer myself).
But this looks really good.
528) ... and you make her do it half naked, in undies only. o.O ... and you extend this to your female boss
583 - Your female boss agrees
530) Your boss thinks you nuts for trying to wield a lightsaber