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machievelli · 12-03-2012, 08:22 PM

Did you read my critique? What this is, is not a story; it's a synopsis, since there is no characterization or detail to catch the reader's eye.

12-03-2012, 08:22 PM	#10
machievelli Local curmudgeon Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Las Vegas Nevada Posts: 2,670 Current Game: Dungeonseige series	Did you read my critique? What this is, is not a story; it's a synopsis, since there is no characterization or detail to catch the reader's eye. 'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that? From the one who brought you; What we die for... Acceptance KOTOR excerpts Star Wars: The Beginning Star Wars: Republic Dawn Return From Exile
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