Thread: [WIP] The Liberation of Manaan
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Old 05-11-2013, 12:08 PM   #47
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Yep I'm really liking what I'm seeing only thing maybe it's just me but "my team were ambushed..." Dosent sound right to me. I believe it should be "my team was ambushed" forgive me if I'm wrong. Anyways keep up the good work .

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Thanks, I've been writing a lot of dialog lately so there's bound to be some errors. I will of course proof read everything, or get someone to do it for me before release.


My WIP: The Liberation of Manaan

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