lfnetwork.com mark read register faq members calendar

Thread: Razputin's Life Chapter 2
Thread Tools Display Modes
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Old 02-18-2006, 08:59 PM   #1
zelda 41
Loop Zoop
 
zelda 41's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 2,547
Current Game: FFX HD/Persona 3 Portable
Razputin's Life Chapter 2

YAY!!! Chapter 2 is here!!(well, part 1 at least)

Chapter 2:The Arrival

Lili stared out the window of her father's limo,annoyed and bored. She was never with her father anymore so, she wasn't disapointed when she learned he wasn't coming to the Annual Father-Daugther Festival at the circus. She didn't mind him canceling at last minute... even if it was the 4th time he'd canceled.It was a long trip to the circus, and Lili hadn't gotten any sleep, so she took a small nap.....


"Ms. Zanotto?"
Lili woke up to her driver, Jeeves, shaking her to wake up.

"Ms. Zanotto, please com on.We're at the circus."

Lili sighed.
"Okay."
Shaking, Lili got out of the limo.

"Lili!"
A sudden, yet familer voice called Lili's name. It was Milla!! Wait,what the heck?Lili thought.

"Milla?"
Lili asked, stunned.

TO BE CONTIUED!!! Not End of Chapter 2

Last edited by zelda 41; 02-19-2006 at 10:20 AM.
zelda 41 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 02-18-2006, 10:42 PM   #2
KingCheez
that didnt last because i
 
KingCheez's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: i use my laptop from my bed 99% of the time
Posts: 2,068
If we all made a new topic for each chapter of our fanfics, this forum would be flooded. It's not really yay, either, honestly.

Space after punctuation, spellcheck, just... uugh. :[

KingCheez is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 02-18-2006, 11:00 PM   #3
zelda 41
Loop Zoop
 
zelda 41's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Posts: 2,547
Current Game: FFX HD/Persona 3 Portable
It all joins... evetialy(crap,spelled that wrong)
zelda 41 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Go Back   LucasForums > Network > Psychonauts Discussion at Razputin's Domain > Razputin's Domain Forums > Thorney Towers Creativity Room > Razputin's Life Chapter 2

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:29 PM.

LFNetwork, LLC ©2002-2011 - All rights reserved.
Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.