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09-22-2002, 12:43 PM
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Morning Mist Dew...Song/Poem...
I posted this as a song in Escape MI...but can also be a poem too...so I just copied and pasted it from EscapeMI to Here...
Morning Mist Dew
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I sit here all alone,
I stare to the sky in the dark,
I find no remorse,
This place an evil source,
The sting...like a whip to the face,
The aftereffect like burning mace...
All the stuff you say,
All that light the way,
All you feel inside,
Like morning mist dew,
Tonight....
I love the way you are,
I love the way you love me,
I love the playful kiss,
But still you cant see this,
Oh, I say, you still cant see this...
All the stuff you say,
All that light the way,
All you feel inside,
Like morning mist dew,
Tonight....
All the stuff you say,
All that light the way,
All you feel inside,
Like morning mist dew,
Tonight....
I said I love (love) you (you)
I said I need (need) you (you)
Oh yeah...
All the stuff you say,
All that light the way,
All you feel inside,
Like morning mist dew,
Tonight....
*Talks*
I love you, girl
-------------no copywright...yet...so do not copy--------------
( ) = Echo
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09-22-2002, 01:33 PM
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*snaps for the poem.*
you should try asking Lucasarts
to make a dancing donkey emodicon
that way it will fit perfectly into
your patriotic signature.
(and kudos for the request
but you know cyber space
is fair game anyone seeing
and liking your poem
can and will co-opt it.)

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity, lick once and you suck forever
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09-22-2002, 08:35 PM
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guess ur right...but ill find em and kick their butt....
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09-23-2002, 12:48 AM
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"Fight The Good Fight Babe!"
"Okay You Go Teach Those
Bricks a Lesson."
"Can I take your Hole Punch?"
"Ha! I Doubt you could take
my Half Punch."

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10-03-2002, 04:32 PM
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Yeah...lol....i like me song tho
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10-18-2002, 02:25 PM
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lol, this post went down the drain
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10-19-2002, 06:29 AM
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I don't know if I would say that?
look forum members are viewing it,
not everyone will respond, most might
just read your poem, feel moved and then
go out and be a better person, or get
drunk or high or have sex, all worthy
activities. so I think the health
and well being of forum members
is in your hands so keep at it


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10-19-2002, 04:30 PM
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damn good poem/song thing. there's some good writers here in yourself and darth - and my scratchings of course.
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This is the night. This is the end of one hope, the dawn of another . This is the beginning of all that may yet be. This is solitude. This is moonlight. This is the darkness.
"I will do what I have to do. I will do what I must." - The Sandman.
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10-20-2002, 02:22 AM
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that's right.
a real poet beatnik
recites just so he can
hear himself talking bonedaddy.
he\she\it is the only form
of public forum they require.
I post SAD in 3 categories
not to be told I am great
*oh I LIE! yes I do.*
no I post them
and started posting them
because the Blue Casket says poetry.
And since I came on forum
I think it has gotten
a little busier than it was.
I mean High Rollers
and Calavera Cafe
will always get more posts,
but you must not concern yourself
with postage man,
or a stamp of approval;
that's for uptight
rain or sleet or snow,
bacon smelling carrier pidgeons
of the capitalist burocracy.
*snap, snap*

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10-20-2002, 12:19 PM
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Testify!
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This is the night. This is the end of one hope, the dawn of another . This is the beginning of all that may yet be. This is solitude. This is moonlight. This is the darkness.
"I will do what I have to do. I will do what I must." - The Sandman.
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11-04-2002, 06:58 PM
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U said it Brotha! 
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