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Sorry i'm late. This is after everyone is in Jin's class
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Renee ran with Gwen in to the tent and followed her through the big top.
Renee ran past Gwen, soon a crater appeared and without waiting for any of her friends, Renee jumped in to the crater.
"If Jin lost control to his nightmare then... could I?" Renee asked herself while falling through the carter.
Yessssssss. a voice in her head replied as she summoned a levitation ball as she was reaching the bottom of the crater.
Renee shook her head and listened for the voice, but none was heard. "Great... now I'm hearing things." She thought sourly reaching the bottom of the crater.
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10-07-2005, 05:51 PM
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Sorry i'm late. This is after everyone is in Jin's class
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Renee ran with Gwen in to the tent and followed her through the big top.
Renee ran past Gwen, soon a crater appeared and without waiting for any of her friends, Renee jumped in to the crater.
"If Jin lost control to his nightmare then... could I?" Renee asked herself while falling through the carter.
Yessssssss. a voice in her head replied as she summoned a levitation ball as she was reaching the bottom of the crater.
Renee shook her head and listened for the voice, but none was heard. "Great... now I'm hearing things." She thought sourly reaching the bottom of the crater.
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Gwen hit the ground with a thud. She pulled her face out of the ground and brushed her short hair out of her eyes. She looked over to see Renee, and Gwen was a bit jealous. Renee seemed to be ready for whatever came, and here Gwen was... eating dirt. Even VERNON was more take charge than her, and he just finished talking about his moustache...
"So, hey Renee... we're just... saving Jin's mind right now. I guess. Not sure what's next..."
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10-07-2005, 06:09 PM
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Jake landed next to Gwen who seemed to forget about the levitation ball "wow i'm suprised nothings broken" Jake said this while checking around for any dangers when he did'nt find any he asked "hey where is Raz"
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10-07-2005, 06:14 PM
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...she certainly had forgotten about the levitation ball. But it didn't matter, she wasn't that good at it yet, anyway.
"I'm surprised nothing's broken, too... usually my bones hurt whenever they get the chance... as for Raz, uh, did he go up ahead, maybe?"
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10-07-2005, 06:16 PM
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Jake saw three small dark hallways that appeared out of nowhere "I vote for not splitting up" he said as a growl came from one of the tunnels
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10-07-2005, 06:21 PM
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"...Agreed."
I may not be the best with common sense, Gwen thought bitterly, But I'm not a total moron.
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10-07-2005, 06:36 PM
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Gwen hit the ground with a thud. She pulled her face out of the ground and brushed her short hair out of her eyes. She looked over to see Renee, and Gwen was a bit jealous. Renee seemed to be ready for whatever came, and here Gwen was... eating dirt. Even VERNON was more take charge than her, and he just finished talking about his moustache...
"So, hey Renee... we're just... saving Jin's mind right now. I guess. Not sure what's next..."
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"Neither am I." Renee hissed now noticing the three hallways.
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10-07-2005, 06:41 PM
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"What do we do now? Wait for something?"
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10-07-2005, 06:53 PM
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"We have to wait for Raz, but if something comes out of those hallways we have to fight it the best we can." Renee said putting a hand on her head.
"I have to protect them the best I can... if I can't protect them... then I shouldn't become a Psychonaut." Renne silently quoted to herself.
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10-07-2005, 06:55 PM
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Gwen coughed into her fist.
"Well, I may have a problem with the fighting thing..."
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10-07-2005, 06:58 PM
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Jake looked at her "heh that makes two of us" Jake stepped closer to the tunnels a bit "hey do you guys here that"
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10-07-2005, 06:59 PM
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"Then stand back and I'll protect you!" Renee yelled as something was starting to form from the hallways.
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10-07-2005, 06:59 PM
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Happy for a change-of-subject, Gwen perked her ears. "Hear what now?"
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10-07-2005, 07:01 PM
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a huge spider emege from the middle hallway "I got it" yelled Jake as he ran at the beast but it knocked to the side before he could do any damage "I don't got it" he screamed as he hit the wall
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10-07-2005, 07:03 PM
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"What on Earth?" Renee began to ask, but something black came out of the hallways and smashed her against the wall of the crater.
"Ahhh!!!" Renee cried in pain. as the creature was digging it's claws in to her shoulders.
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10-07-2005, 07:09 PM
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Gwen was frozen. Two people had gone down, and she was the only one who could do something...
"Hey guys?! You okay?! Because, uh, I REALLY CAN'T DO ANYTHING!"
She thought she could possibly get close enough to Renee, but she wasn't so sure she could help Jake, if he even needed her help... she couldn't shoot or anything.
"I CAME TO THIS PLACE TO FREAKING LEARN!"
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"AND I HATE SPIDERS!"
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10-07-2005, 07:20 PM
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Flashes of the orphanage came back to her.
Flashback
All of her friends were laughing at her... one of them looked at Renee with pity and then a gunshot was heard. The one that was looking at her layed on the ground in a pool of her own blood.
"Sorcina!"Renee cried as she ran over to her friend.
Sorcina stared at Renee with what were now dull grey eyes.
"Renee... gasp... you're... powers... are... what... make... gasp... better... than...anyone." Sorcina Gasped and then died.
"No... Sorcina... y-you can't die! Not yet... No Sorcina... SORCINAAAAA!!!" Renee screamed.
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"SORCINAAAA!!!"Renee secramed as a blinding white light surrounded her. The spider was thrown against the crater wall.
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10-07-2005, 07:32 PM
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Gwen, who had been on the verge of tears before, cast a look at Renee... Sorcina? Who...?
She couldn't think about that now. She had to be ANGRY. She had to... focus? On what? Anger? She could focus it and magnify it... and...
BLAM! A horribly aimed psi-blast was shot in the general direction of the spider. "What the hell was that?!"
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10-07-2005, 07:35 PM
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Gwen, who had been on the verge of tears before, cast a look at Renee... Sorcina? Who...?
She couldn't think about that now. She had to be ANGRY. She had to... focus? On what? Anger? She could focus it and magnify it... and...
BLAM! A horribly aimed psi-blast was shot in the general direction of the spider. "What the hell was that?!"
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Renee slid down the crater wall and looked up to see that Gwen had shot something out of her head.
"WTF!?" Renee cried in shock. "Gwen what the hell was that and what did you do to that spider?" She asked struggling to stand.
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10-07-2005, 07:37 PM
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"Seriously! WTF?!"
She wasn't quite sure herself, but she realised the blast could hurt stuff. Stuff with eight legs. Stuff that was charging towards Renee in a fit of icky, spidery, revengey rage.
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10-07-2005, 07:41 PM
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Spiders were comming at Renee fairly quickly.
"Ooooh hell no!"Renee cried as she kicked a spider.
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10-07-2005, 07:43 PM
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Having hath overcome the roadblock that was 'learning-how-to-shoot-stuff-with-her-mind', Gwen was shooting spiders from atop a small rock, apologizing to each one...
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10-07-2005, 07:46 PM
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"Don't apologize to the damn things Kill 'em, 'cause they're trying to kill us!" Renne screamed madly.
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God this is fun... I gotta go.
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"I'm sorry! I can't help it!" She said as she shot another spider, her head feeling lighter by the second. "Uh, I can't do this much longer... Where's everybody else?!"
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10-07-2005, 07:50 PM
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"I don't know!" Renee cried.
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10-07-2005, 07:53 PM
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"I... can't...shoot...thingies...more...wooh." Gwen fell off of the rock in a daze, fainting into the small crowd of spidery-nastiness.
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10-07-2005, 09:13 PM
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Jake got up not sure of what happend but suddenly everything came back in a flash of light "great a one hit k.o" Jake surronded his fist with ice "ok mr spider no more mister nice....!" a whole barrage of spiders where attacking Renee and Gwen "well better get to work" he ran full speed freezing anything in his path and dodging a few pincers "heh to easy he froze a spider sneaking up on Gwen.
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Sokolov had followed suit down the crater after hearing the screaming coming from below. He pulled out his camera and charged the flash... it was dark down here. As he reached the bottom, he snapped a picture in the general direction of a spider which caused the thing to immediately shriek and flip into a twitchy fit on the ground.
"So, light hurts them..." he thought, re-charging his flashgun.
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10-07-2005, 09:18 PM
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Gwen sat up quickly, rubbing her head.
"Apparently I can't do that for long." After realising where she was and what was happening, she screamed and jumped back onto the rock where she had sat before. There she kicked at the spiders, wishing they would leave.
"Ugh... oh, and thanks, Jake! I'd help, but, uh... I'm a little busy."
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10-07-2005, 09:40 PM
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Just then, four men cloaked in dark black capes emerged from nowhere. They approached the group quickly, as just then the new boy and Raz jumped down from seemingly nowhere. Vernon followed quickly as well, pushing back the spiders and beasts. "Wait," said Raz, "where'd you come from?"
The boy looked at Raz, taking off his visor. "First of all, I have a name. It's Robert. Robert Benton Awaoru. And second," he said, looking up with pure red eyes (as in, not just the pupils, but complete red.) "I'm as much in control of this mind as my dad."
More spiders, and some antlions came from burrows in the ground, and he lifted one of them up, ripping it open with his mind. He flung its rock-hard cold parts into the crowd, warping into the crowd and bringing his fists down, flinging the beasts around. "Get ready for the really weird part," he said. "This is his childhood memories."
They entered a battlefield - a gigantic dead battlefield. "He was a junior medic. He had to get all the wounded into medical stations. He got shot in the eye, too."
As he walked further, grass turned to sand, and giant beasts came from all sides, waiting for their chance to strike. "Don't take your eyes off them," he said. "Welcome to the Fistful of Sand."
Raz, Vernon, and Robert all marched at the front of the line, keeping close eyes on them. "If even one of them is watched, they won't jump us. Don't blink." Just then, a dust storm kicked up, and they were blinded. In the silence and blackness, the three were suddenly surrounded.
"Oh christ, this is what I was afraid of," said Robert.

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10-07-2005, 09:50 PM
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(Cheez, what do we do? The other peeps?)
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(Help with the big anty-evil-guys.)
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(Right on. I might need a starter sentence, though... help?)
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Jake looked around a sand storm had started "uggh..hey is that Raz he started to run over there but spiders started to surround him "oh crap this is'nt going to end well"
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Jake looked around a sand storm had started "uggh..hey is that Raz he started to run over there but spiders started to surround him "oh crap this is'nt going to end well"
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"Jake hang on!" Renee cried avoiding a spider's bite.
"There sure are a lot of these things." Renee hissed through her teeth.
She saw Gwen struggling(sp?) with the spiders that surrounded her. Jake was freezing the spider's around him,but Renee knew that he couldn't keep that up for long.
Anger surged through he as the light apperared again. The spiders shrunk away trying to get away from the light.
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Jake looked over towrds Renee "WTF?" he thought as the light made them shirnk away "hmmmm.. I got hey Renee aim the light at this" Jake made an Ice prism and started to point at it "quickly"
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Jake looked over towrds Renee "WTF?" he thought as the light made them shirnk away "hmmmm.. I got hey Renee aim the light at this" Jake made an Ice prism and started to point at it "quickly"
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"OK I'll try!" Renee cried trying to focus the light on the prism. After a couple of tries(sp?) Renee was finally able to focus the light on the prism.
Light exploded from the prism in every direction hitting the spiders and making them shrivle(sp?) up like rasins(sp?).
The spiders dissappeared and suddenly there was a rumbling noise.
"Ahhh! What the hell!? Robert what's going on?" Renee asked grabbing Gwen and Jake's arms. Renee, Jake, and Gwen ran over to Raz, Robert, and Vermon.
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Sorry for controling your characters for a moment guys, but it just seemed to fit.
Anyway tag to Robert.
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I needed to replace some things.
Insted of Renee ran over to Raz I wanted to put. Renee And the others jumped over the evil things.
Also Renee heard Robert say don't blink and told Jake and Gwen this.
sorry my computer won't let me edit so sorry for this post.
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as they landed Jake let out a yell "ouch Renee don't pull so hard" as he rubbed a wound on his arm he saw Raz,Robert and Vernon fighting some people "we should help them"
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Robert produced a psychic weapon from his mentality, and struck forth at the beasts, and Vernon psi-blasted others way. Raz pushed all his telekinesis to shove one of the beasts away, and Robert flung his pole into the sand. Everything drained out, like a giant bathtub. As the color was sucked out of the world through a vortex in the sky, Robert lit up a thought bubble torch and held it above him. It was, in fact, a giant floodgate. "Just what I thought. We're going through Aquatic Horror. We've been cursed never to swim."
"...So have I!" claimed Razputin, shocked.
"Great," groaned Robert. "Two of us can't swim, and Dad's on the wrong side of this mess." Tears welled up into his pure red eyes, and he lowered his visor and turned it slightly to the side. "Here it comes." The gates began to explode, and as they were forced into the water, the Hands of Galochio reached for all of them. Through his tears, he forced a path through the water. As a Hand reached into the path, he store intently at it, and it snapped, breaking into just normal water. He saw at the far end his father, being carried away by black cloaked beasts. Though his tears, he lost control of the water.
They were sucked back in, and the boy swam towards the airlock. He held on to Raz, shoving the Hands out of his way. Vernon casually swam behind, as the Hands parted for them. The airlock swung open, and they all came inside, those behind were sucked in. Pressurized air blew down, and the airlock disconnected from the very earth, into space.
"We're going in," said Robert, jamming open the sliding double-door combo with his Psychic Staff.

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