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Old 10-17-2005, 06:20 PM   #41
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I do have a snippet from my fanfiction. Well, before I scrapped it so Paranoidish and I can collab on it. This is like the idea process for it. When I feel like writing down dialouge or snippets I write it down.

I hope writing down whatever comes to my head works, if not, I'm suing myself.

"He's playing mind games with me." Oleander realized. "Mind games with a Psychonaut."
But Loboto's devilish smile only curled once he saw Oleander's reaction. "But of course, we're not hear to talk about you, we're here for me."

More crap from my head:

His voice was shrill, dipping in and out of various pitches, somehow able to find the right note to cut clean through one's hearing.
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Old 10-17-2005, 06:35 PM   #42
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Um....
Do they like each other?
How different are they from the regular Sasha and Milla?
Was X Sasha evil? I think he was.
What are their backgrounds?(should I just make this up)
Do they have like any special powers?
Is there anything you want me to put in the story?


Yes, lots of questions...
I'll get on it, sir!

And, Klia! That sounds fantastic.

Hey. Hang on a second...


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:38 PM   #43
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... I'm a girl...


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:39 PM   #44
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I know, I just call everyone sir.

Because ma'am makes people sound like sissies.

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Old 10-17-2005, 06:40 PM   #45
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not that I can think of


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:42 PM   #46
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Mkay. For question 2, you asked if they liked each other.

As in love or as in friend type things?


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:42 PM   #47
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Old 10-17-2005, 06:45 PM   #48
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hey should I give them a background together?
like they met in a different place, a different time, different situation and then they met each other when they're arch nemisis's and they're like,

"whoa, it's you from before... I like you before, and now you my arch nemisi?


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:46 PM   #49
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I do have a snippet from my fanfiction. Well, before I scrapped it so Paranoidish and I can collab on it. This is like the idea process for it. When I feel like writing down dialouge or snippets I write it down.

I hope writing down whatever comes to my head works, if not, I'm suing myself.

"He's playing mind games with me." Oleander realized. "Mind games with a Psychonaut."
But Loboto's devilish smile only curled once he saw Oleander's reaction. "But of course, we're not hear to talk about you, we're here for me."

More crap from my head:

His voice was shrill, dipping in and out of various pitches, somehow able to find the right note to cut clean through one's hearing.
Wow, that sounds great already. Hey, if there's any way I can help...

I assume this is a 'How they met' fic?


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:47 PM   #50
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hey should I give them a background together?
like they met in a different place, a different time, different situation
I'm putting it in this little summary, so I'll give you all the answers at once, okay?


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Old 10-17-2005, 06:47 PM   #51
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Old 10-17-2005, 07:00 PM   #52
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Wow, that sounds great already. Hey, if there's any way I can help...

I assume this is a 'How they met' fic?
Mmm..yeah basically.

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hey should I give them a background together?
like they met in a different place, a different time, different situation and then they met each other when they're arch nemisis's and they're like,

"whoa, it's you from before... I like you before, and now you my arch nemisi?
It could have just been a picture of Milla kicking Sasha's ass because she was pissed at him....

But I'm not the artist.
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Old 10-17-2005, 07:08 PM   #53
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It could have just been a picture of Milla kicking Sasha's ass because she was pissed at him....

But I'm not the artist.
But I am! Woohoo!

And of course she was pissed. He was probably... poisoning... kittens or something.


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Old 10-17-2005, 07:13 PM   #54
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Was the Pm sent already?


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Old 10-17-2005, 07:14 PM   #55
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No, I'm trying to think about something logically...


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Old 10-17-2005, 07:16 PM   #56
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Old 10-17-2005, 08:58 PM   #57
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I do have a snippet from my fanfiction. Well, before I scrapped it so Paranoidish and I can collab on it. This is like the idea process for it. When I feel like writing down dialouge or snippets I write it down.

I hope writing down whatever comes to my head works, if not, I'm suing myself.

"He's playing mind games with me." Oleander realized. "Mind games with a Psychonaut."
But Loboto's devilish smile only curled once he saw Oleander's reaction. "But of course, we're not hear to talk about you, we're here for me."

More crap from my head:

His voice was shrill, dipping in and out of various pitches, somehow able to find the right note to cut clean through one's hearing.
Why am I not told of these things???



^Above picture=awesome.
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Old 10-17-2005, 09:13 PM   #58
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Why am I not told of these things???
You didn't even know about it?

Klia. Such a sneak.


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Old 10-17-2005, 09:16 PM   #59
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Why am I not told of these things???
Dude. I JUST told you on IM.

Trying to spread lies about me now are you?

Unless...unless you are that other person who likes to crawl into Paranoidish's account some times. The one who doesn't write Becky/Jasper.
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Old 10-17-2005, 09:18 PM   #60
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OH SNAP!!! I'm lost!


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Old 10-17-2005, 09:30 PM   #61
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Dude. I JUST told you on IM.

Trying to spread lies about me now are you?

Unless...unless you are that other person who likes to crawl into Paranoidish's account some times. The one who doesn't write Becky/Jasper.
That explains the sig.

OR THE STRANGE JEKYLL AND HYDE SIMILARITIES OCCURING ALL OVER THE PLACE.


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Old 10-17-2005, 09:51 PM   #62
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Will someone tell me something for my fic cause I'm confused.

Milla was on the dock when she got kidnapped, but she left a note saying she was on "official psychonauts business." What happened? How could she leave a note is she got taken?

I think the reason Sasha left was cause she got kidnapped.


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Old 10-17-2005, 09:56 PM   #63
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Will someone tell me something for my fic cause I'm confused.

Milla was on the dock when she got kidnapped, but she left a note saying she was on "official psychonauts business." What happened? How could she leave a note is she got taken?

I think the reason Sasha left was cause she got kidnapped.
No, Oleander told them they had business to do.

Milla wrote a note before she was kidnapped, I suppose.


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Old 10-17-2005, 10:00 PM   #64
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Milla was on the dock when she got kidnapped, but she left a note saying she was on "official psychonauts business." What happened? How could she leave a note is she got taken?
I've been trying to figure that one out for the longest time. I think it's a plot hole. Either that or Morry planted the note somehow...how he'd get it in her handwriting, though, I don't know.

I don't think Sasha knew Milla was kidnapped, though, because Cruller didn't either--he just knew he couldn't make contact with either of them. I think Sasha just got an "official Psychonauts business" page, dashed off, and got ambushed right outside the GPC by the lungfish. (Although he could've been lured to the asylum like Lili suggested...but I dunno; the GPC entrance/exit is a perfect spot for an ambush, IMHO.)

But, yeah, I ramble. It's a plot hole. Sorry.
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Old 10-17-2005, 10:10 PM   #65
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it is, I can imagine ninja's ambushing Sasha though.


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Old 10-18-2005, 06:04 PM   #66
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That's actually a good point to bring up I think it was that Oly sent them the notes and said they had business @ the asylum. So when they went there they got ambushed by Loboto. Then their brains were taken. And that would wrap it up.




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Old 10-18-2005, 06:08 PM   #67
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That's actually a good point to bring up I think it was that Oly sent them the notes and said they had business @ the asylum. So when they went there they got ambushed by Loboto. Then their brains were taken. And that would wrap it up.
Oleander DID tell them they all had official Psychonauts business. They were kidnapped by Linda, who took them to Loboto and yadayadayada.


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Old 10-18-2005, 06:54 PM   #68
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I still didn't get the pm, yet.


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I still didn't get the pm, yet.
DAMMIT! I'm sorry, I forgot...

I'll send it soon, I swear.


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Old 10-18-2005, 08:10 PM   #70
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All this talking about Sasha and Milla being kidnapped has helped my story. I've been taking notes.

Thank you all!
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I've totally eaten your sig, Klia. I am made happy.

I have been noting this as well, but to a lesser extent I'm sure. Not for a fic, eh....

Hmm. Anyone want to help me with X Sasha and Super Milla?


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Hoho, you can't help me. I'm trying to find help for me so I can help you...

I'm stuck at backgrounds. They were just silly, cute pictures. I didn't expect them to have a fic. XD

It's good, though. I'll figure something out.


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how?
Are you asking how it helped or the the SashaXMilla fic?

And wow. You have eaten my sig. I will go change that immediatly.

I'll help with the fic if you want me too. Just send over what you have. I'll edit and write some more of it then give it back or not.
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well where are they from? an alternate dimention
do they have parents? yeah, but they haven't seen them in a while
how did they get there powers? they just got them
where do they work? milla-teacher, sasha- engineer
do they have secret identies? yes, Sasha, Milla no one can tell tell that X Sasha is Sasha.

ideas for background


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Do they like each other
how did they meet


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Oh, snap.

Anyone, answer these questions. Let's make this... a .... game. Whoo! Make up your own answers to those questions whilst I... open a word document.


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Oh, snap.

Anyone, answer these questions. Let's make this... a .... game. Whoo! Make up your own answers to those questions whilst I... open a word document.
Cheap-o. Stress the O
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Hey, you'd answer them if I was Mr. Fantastic.

So pretend I'm him and answer. Wh000~! Funxx0r!

...Fine. I'm working on it. Because I REALLY want to see this fic.


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Hey, you'd answer them if I was Mr. Fantastic.

So pretend I'm him and answer. Wh000~! Funxx0r!

...Fine. I'm working on it. Because I REALLY want to see this fic.
Well then I'll just wait for the official stuff.
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