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Old 08-23-2006, 08:24 AM   #921
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Ugh this makes me want to write a serious story

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Old 08-23-2006, 08:38 AM   #922
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I started with Corruption of the Mind and I'll do the new guys story next, I'm not quite sure of what to make of this story. I like it, I just don't know what to make of it.
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Old 08-23-2006, 12:15 PM   #923
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Last two, please explain to me what those fiction ideas were, it won't be ruined. I find telling others sometimes inspires me.
Just some older Crystal/Clemness. So probably nothing anybody would wanna read.
But basically, over time Crystal has learned to cope with her problems, but Clem has only gotten worse. Crystal tracks down her old friend and tries to help him. Milla and my oc Alegria are also there for some reason. There's also some flashbackyness to their last year at camp, and Crystal's turning point.

Mostly I doubt it'll ever come into existence because it's a bit serious for my tatses. And I'm not all that into fanfiction anyway.


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Old 08-24-2006, 02:03 AM   #924
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PYRO FORGOT MINE TOO!!

I thought we were bff's, internet style. ~Emoness~

I'm DarthAvery
OMG sorry Darth!

Also, to complete Darth's list, I have got magical shiny oneshots!

The wind cries Mary, by Darth Avery- A lost camper's diary as she talks about her last days on Earth...

Surreality, by Miss Trippy- Milla and Sasha share a nightmare.

Kissing a fool, by Darth Avery- A portrail of the moment when Lili and Elton fell out.

Horrorific, by Darh Avery- (Yes Darth, another one of yours) Several Psychonauts characters go to see a certain film...

Barefoot, by Angelbloodshinra- Bobby and Chloe chat and stuff.

Under the wall, by Nefalkarx- Raz and Lili go skinny dipping.

Cerice, by Lovova- An insane pyromaniac reminisces on some very horrible deeds. (Note the fact that the character used is mine)

When did THAT happen? by Grovecityfan- A collection of really weird and funny quotes.

Sam X Linda, by Magewriter- A cute story about our favorite denizens of the deepish Lake Oblongata.

Monty Python's mental patient, by Starlight's delight- Raz meets some crazy frenchmen in Fred's mind. (Crossover with Monty Python)

I don't drink, thanks, by TheFarceHunter- Sasha's at a party. You can guess what kind of anti-social behavior this causes.

The awesomest day, by KarAniyuki- Maloof fell asleep forever. That... Gives anyone who reads this an idea of what happens. EVEN BETTER than the other awesomest (insert time period here) fanfics.

The awesomer day, by KarAniyuki- A really funny fanfic with Mary Sues, potato sculptures and more!

She does this little thing, by Narcotic Dollie- Sasha and Milla, now married, go out with the now adult Raz and Lili. Chaos ensues.

Dare Me, by Narcotic Dollie- Sasha loses a bet to Morry.

Why Sasha gets no M&Ms, by Lily23- Sasha goes on a sugar high.

And, in summary, that's it. I didn't put any of my stuff there because it wouldn't seem right. I'm egotistical. Anyway, Darth and I seem to have put up the best fanfics around! Everyone go stare blindly at them while you mind turns to goo!


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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

"I Miss You... Miss You So Bad..."
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Old 08-24-2006, 04:53 AM   #925
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Monty Python's mental patient, by Starlight's delight- Raz meets some crazy frenchmen in Fred's mind. (Crossover with Monty Python)
..where is this story and where can I die for it's cause.

Though the name could use work, Monty Python's Prying Psychics is better. Because it sounds vaguely like Monty Python's Flying Circus.


I'm done putting links in my signature because every time I do it just links to some old crap I've long since stopped updating.
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Old 08-24-2006, 04:07 PM   #926
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Yes, and please read my fiction, because I WANT REVIEWS!! Because when I get reviews, I'll write more of Kissing A Fool.

Anyone notice how I always pretty much title my fanfics with songs by Michael Buble or Jimi Hendrix?
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Old 08-25-2006, 12:17 AM   #927
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Haha, except for 'Psychonauts characters sing Queen!' Because, I mean, that's like, just talking about Queen. Also, Darth, your obsession with Queen helped me in a music quiz once!
~cheers loudly~
Yay for Darth! And for fashion shows!


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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

"I Miss You... Miss You So Bad..."
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Old 08-26-2006, 03:21 PM   #928
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It's sad how some of the best fanfics get deleted. I really liked Blue Blaze and this Raz/Lili vamp fic that is gone at this point. I suppose the authors realize that they wont get around to updating the story anymore and delete it. I think it's better if they simply let it die quietly so newbies get the chance to read it later. Or have a fan complete the story for them, that is the best that can become of an abandoned fic. Lovova did that for one of her stories and things worked out fine until she got back and could complete it herself.

If it's any consolation, Pnauts seems to have a more dedicated fanbase then alot of the best-selling games. Splinter Cell is a big seller and has only 30 something fics, God Of War has less than that, and Prince of Persia, which has more fanficcery possibilities than aforementioned has less than a 100.

But still...and when favorite authors go as well, it's kinda brings you down a bit too. I've been reading Pnauts fanfics on FF since there were only 3 pages worth of fanfiction (most 1shots), and longtime readers see how the community changes in terms of popular subjects, the number of fics added and the authors. 2 I can mention are Fluffle and Magewriter. FluffleNeCharka is infamous for her slash here, but she was more known for the sheer amounf of fanfics she's written on FF. Most were 1shots and/or drabbles, and I admit that I'm not too compelled to read most 1shots unless they're humor since the subject matter is rather limited to romances and I dont even really like to put fluff in my own stories, but she has also written some very good action/adventureish type things. She was once real active and well-recieved but she's mostly gone now.

Magewriter was another. Her writing style is very passive and pacifist, but her writing is still good. She dropped a Psychonauts version of Pride and prejudice sadly enough, I doubt she'll continue. Seeing as she's an FF bud I actually keep in contact with, I've beta'd a few of her newer fics, and she's of now really into Radiata Stories (I'm not too sure of the name). She's gotten alot better in her writing, so I'd like to see more Pnauts fics from her, but I doubt she will.

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Old 08-27-2006, 02:30 AM   #929
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I could help out with you there, Mayhem. I've read 'A summer of psychics' several times, and know it pretty well.

Also, I never noticed that the Raz and Lili vampire fanfiction disappeared. Weird... That was really good.

Also, for anyone here who reads Truman's Rescue, I would like to say that I haven't abandoned it, I've just... OK, to tell you the truth, I have a bit of writer's block. Here's what I have so far in the new chapter. PM me if you could help out. I know what direction I want it to go in, I just need a push.

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Sasha pressed his fingers to the back of Maximilian’s neck. Maximilian laughed gently, although the noise still managed to sound like a threesome of donkeys.
“I don’t need to explain what I’ll do if you move,” Sasha chuckled, his normally warm, cheerful voice cold with hatred.
“Haha, I see you haven’t changed,” Maximilian cheered as the man shoved his fingers in harder.
“Tell me how you did it,” Sasha hissed.
“Oh, I think you know that,” Maximilian said, a slight smile coming to his face.
“But what I really need to know is how you found me,”
“Oh, but I would think it obvious Maximilian!” Sasha cheered, a sneer beginning to form on his face.
“You think everything is obvious, Sasha. But only you can ever truly understand these things,” Maximilian toyed, rolling and deliberating each word to make sure it sounded perfect.
“That’s because everything that’s happened… Is simply, deliciously, delightfully simple,” Sasha giggled. Maximilian smiled at him.
“That, my dear friend, is exactly what I thought you would say,” Maximilian muttered, a sneer on his face.
“Why do you say that?” Sasha asked, a smirk on his face. Maximilian laughed.
“Why, Sasha my friend! I thought everything was simple? What a change of heart you’ve had. But now, I’m afraid, it is time for you to lose something… Very dear,” Maximilian cackled.
“No,” Sasha muttered.
“Yes,” Maximilian hissed.
“It’s all up to a simple game… Of mind power,” Maximilian chuckled, summoning a psycho portal out of seemingly nowhere.
“Prepare for the fight of your life, Sasha Nein,”
“I’m ready,”

XXX

Milla tore up the hall with her long stilettos, traveling at speeds high enough that she could outrun a cheetah. Probably not, but nevertheless, she was going very fast.
“Wait for us!” Raz cried. But Milla was determined. She would not let them get away… She would not let Sasha get away…
“Wait!” The others called after her, but she paid no attention. All that mattered was him. Because he… Was the only partner she wanted.

XXX

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Anyway, that update and more coming soon! I haven't abandoned anything... Also, next chapter of 'Always and forever' all done. Check out the site for it!

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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

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Old 08-27-2006, 12:23 PM   #930
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Old 08-27-2006, 12:25 PM   #931
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-Yep, I was the one who forced her to register by registering her an account, so sometimes I don't think and log in as her-

I remember the first Psychonauts fanfic and I read all of the first 5 pages until I lost faith in the FF.net section of Psychonauts.

My problem with most Psychonauts fanfiction is that it has too serious of a tone. It seems people enjoyed the game for its quirkiness but would much rather turn the quirks into something much darker, which loses the surreal psychotic happiness feeling that Psychonauts gave off.

That and the romance section really throws me off. Instead of having the two characters interact in character, as the crazy people they are, they become hollow shells that follow tired paths to romance. Some will even go so far as to change the character's appearance for no reason but to make them more attractive.

I would love to write Psychonauts fanfiction myself, but it's the same reason why I don't write Simpsons fanfiction. The feeling of both is very hard to pin without becoming sappy, akward, or just plain mediocre. I'm reading over my old fanfiction and cringing.

I'd still like to give a crack at it one of these days.

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The part where Max turns against Sasha is very quick, build up to it, it just seems strange that all of a sudden he would turn on him when they're having so much fun. That, or add malice to the first part where they're talking.

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Milla tore up the hall with her long stilettos, traveling at speeds high enough that she could outrun a cheetah. Probably not, but nevertheless, she was going very fast.
This seems very out of place in the context of your story. If you had done this throughout your story, it would have made more sense, but here it just sounds akward.

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Old 08-27-2006, 12:50 PM   #932
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Meh, some of the stories I pointed out are more light-hearted. And yeah, I feel ya on the romance, it can be hard to pull it off well.
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Old 08-27-2006, 12:58 PM   #933
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Meh, some of the stories I pointed out are more light-hearted. And yeah, I feel ya on the romance, it can be hard to pull it off well.
Hey, just to prove that I can't do it, I'm going to link you to my old Boyd fanfiction. It might be good for a laugh or two.

http://xmchord.livejournal.com/833.html
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Old 08-27-2006, 03:25 PM   #934
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Kiki, I'm forbidden. And I'm working on a new chapter of Kissing a Fool.
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Old 08-27-2006, 04:15 PM   #935
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@ Pyro: Pretty good so far, but Sasha's voice is n't warm, even when he's happy his tone is cold and concise. Sasha also doesn't giggle, a simple laugh will suffice in his case.

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Old 08-27-2006, 05:21 PM   #936
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Kiki, I'm forbidden. And I'm working on a new chapter of Kissing a Fool.
Forbidden from the page?
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Old 08-27-2006, 05:37 PM   #937
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It's a 403 forbidden.
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Old 08-27-2006, 06:13 PM   #938
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Try that

http://xmchord.livejournal.com/544.html?mode=reply

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Old 08-27-2006, 06:26 PM   #939
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I hate when websites do that, just buggy I suppose. I dunno, I rather liked the Boyd fic, but the second one I couldn't read. 403 forbidden. Psha, either the URL wasn't ttyped in correctly or it's RD. As of now, i'ts not letting me change avatars T^T
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Old 08-27-2006, 06:34 PM   #940
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Whoops I had it locked

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Old 08-27-2006, 06:36 PM   #941
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YAY!!!

Kinda sad that we never finished out Psychonauts/DF crossover. I even had the plot set out where Dr. Loboto stole 2HB and they had a grand adventure.
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Hey, dont beat yourself up, I liked it. So, if you have and FF account but dont put up any fics your account can be deleted? Hmm, didn't know that. Consider yourself invited to my party below.
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Old 08-27-2006, 06:50 PM   #943
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YAY!!!

Kinda sad that we never finished out Psychonauts/DF crossover. I even had the plot set out where Dr. Loboto stole 2HB and they had a grand adventure.
That would be fun to write, though I'm currently writing other things now. I'm having a lot of trouble starting something, I need to hit on a story that I'm going to enjoy.

Thanks for appreciating my stories both of you, if you don't mind going over there and reviewing by telling me what you like and don't like, I'd appreciate it.

It can be deleted, it doesn't happen too often but every once in a while they have a clean out. I'm already at the party...univited of course.
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Old 08-27-2006, 07:23 PM   #944
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How did you get past the dancing cows??? Oh well, just make sure to leave the dancing monkeys alone, they are very sensitive about their dancing talent and can be quite the biters *rubs wound*. I'd comment, but I don't have an LJ. Just a crappy, boring MySpace account I should just delete already becuz I never go on.
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Old 08-27-2006, 07:35 PM   #945
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I'm in the party. I snuck in through that hole in the wall. ~points to a giant hole in the wall~

And I'm probably gonna finish this next chapter before friday. Unless I forget about it!
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Old 08-27-2006, 08:17 PM   #946
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I mean comment on FF.net!

Looking foward to the next chapter, yes I am.
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Old 08-28-2006, 12:45 AM   #947
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Woot! Updatishness! Always and forever is now more... Long. Wow that was bad grammar. Anyway.

If anyone wants to co-author any of my fics with me, then, uh... Ask away. I need all the help I can get, except with Always and Forever.

So, anyway, any huge fans of anything, ask away if you would like to help write it!

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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

"I Miss You... Miss You So Bad..."
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Old 08-28-2006, 01:51 AM   #948
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PL0T BUNNY! After reading some hilarious parodies retelling other games...why dont we (anyone interested that is) retell the tale of Raz's adventure at Whispering Rock! It would be awesome.

Preview of story that shall never exist:

1. "The Human mind...icky, mushy, pink and grey, a six pound pile of dreams, nightmares, self-pity, woe, memory, random thoughts, and limited imagination," barked a short man with baton in hand.

2. Raz frowned and knelt next to his squat, blue, new-found friend, "They may come for me Dogan. But they'll be looking for Raz, the rebellious, spunky and rather dimwitted boy that liked to let the animals loose during performances. But what they wont know, what they wont expect, is Raz, the rebellious, spunky, slightly less dimwitted boy that likes to let the animals out of their cages during performances with a government warrant."

"Then, then you'll make their heads explode?" Dogan asked innocently.

"No, it wasn't in mind at first but it's a good idea...Do you do that?"

"No, no...well once maybe. My teacher was acting like a total beeyotch. I sure taught her."

3. "So, is this the part where I get a big lecture that I will ignore so I end up repeating my mistakes time and time again?" Raz asked.

"No, though that last part will still hold true nonetheless," Sasha groaned, "let us never speak of this again, besides, I'll be late for my soap. GET OUT OF MY MIND ALREADY! Geez..."
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Old 08-28-2006, 09:52 AM   #949
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That would be a pretty good idea, a parody of the game.

With parodies, a good thing to capitilize on is the faults in the game and exaggeration of the character's personalities. The hard part with Psychonauts is that they were already wacky.

And absolutely no inside jokes. Those always ruin parodies.
EDIT: When Raz meets Boyd we could have a joke where Boyd is making perfect sense, pleading to be let off the island but Raz is convinced he's insane.

Sounds more gruesome when I type it out.
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Ooh, now I want to do it even more.

Boyd sane? LOL!

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Old 08-28-2006, 06:41 PM   #951
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Just updated Chapter 3 of kissin'.

I'm gonna write more after that, I'm just gonna do some PRslash.
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I'd be interested in writing some Psychonauts related fanfiction. I can't even remember the last time I've written some. It'd be good to spark the 'ol geek/author in me.



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Woot! I decided to write PATD related Psychonauts songfics... I'm a loser... Hehe.


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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

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No you're not. I'm going off to read them right now as we speak.

Well not speak, per say, but you get the idea.

Edit: I clicked on your fanfiction link and it said that you were an invalid user. >_>



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Ahh, yes. I must fix that. It shall be less glitchy very soon!


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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

"I Miss You... Miss You So Bad..."
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Yay! It works!



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Old 09-01-2006, 04:40 AM   #957
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Great. Now I get more publicity... Hehehehe...


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With that, pyrohappygirl becomes about 100 times better than Darth_Ave, who is about 100 times better than Shakespeare. So you're like 100,000 times better than Shakespeare, but only a mere 100 times better than me.
Hear that? I'm BETTER THAN SHAKESPEARE!

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Old 09-13-2006, 04:59 PM   #958
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Title: Loboto loves Oleander
Fandom: Psychonauts
Rating: G-men
Notes: You guys made me do this, you guys and your crazy pairing ideas. That and I decided this would be a good time to write about my favorite evil duo. Loboto and Oleander never really interact in the game and that made me sad. One's a madman and one's being driven mad, why isn't Schafer's amazing genius being applied?

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Loboto loves Oleander, more precisely, Loboto loves Oleander's brain. But now he can't do anything about it. Right now he was to poke and prod camper's brains in some silly plot to take over the world or such but Loboto doesn't really care. He's waiting for the day he will be able to poke and prod Oleander's brain.

This newfound desire came to him when he heard Oleander explaining the take-over of Lungfisholplis under the guise of Kochamara before moving on to describe the inner workings of the ultimate terror he was going to wreck upon the world, otherwise known as the Brain Tumbler.

This was indeed one crazy man.

But Loboto had simply sat in his crooked chair, slowly rocking one leg back and forth all the while thinking, as he found himself oft doing. He couldn't take out Oleander's brain right now-otherwise they won't be able to conquer the earth and all of this world-conquering will be good research for his experiments. So he waits through these long, often pointless discussions Oleander always feels is needed. In fact, Oleander was sitting him through one right now complaining about the elevator guard (Crispin was it?) and how he should be able to go freely up and down the tower whenever he damn well feels like it.

Loboto is pleased despite all of this. Pleased to be taking out people's brains, watch over asylum patients and tell Sheegor what to do. Things like this are very pleasing and to be thinking about them right now, makes him so happy he feels like hugging himself but stops, realizing how ridiculous he will look.

So when Oleander breaks his long-winded speech in order to organize some out of order notes, Loboto jumps up to embrace him in a tight, too-friendly hug.

Oleander is so pleased he forgets all about the speech.

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Old 09-13-2006, 05:59 PM   #959
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Aww, what a sweet ending. I really like the ambigious nature of the piece.

Just..*luffs*



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Old 09-13-2006, 06:15 PM   #960
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That was loverly Klia.

I'm working on a Leet Circus style tribute.

It's basically

Willy Wonka and the chocolate factory+Crack+Psychonauts.

In other words...SASHA NEIN AND THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY!!
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