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Old 10-20-2005, 07:55 PM   #121
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Old 10-20-2005, 08:00 PM   #122
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Yeah um... How should I start the story?

and I didn't really get that last part. He wants them to see how far their minds will go?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:02 PM   #123
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Yeah um... How should I start the story?
Hm. Perhaps with the first meeting of the two. An outbreak of a specific disease in only one part of town.

Send me the first chapter when you're done, and I'll beta it, add lines, fix things... does that sound okay?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:03 PM   #124
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Kay, but I didn't really get that last part. He wants them to see how far their minds will go?


Did Sasha cause the outbreak?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:05 PM   #125
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Kay, but I didn't really get that last part. He wants them to see how far their minds will go?


Did Sasha cause the outbreak?
YES. Mental, smart bad guys rule.

RULE, I SAYS.

And we/I want this to be almost old-skool.


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:06 PM   #126
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how did he cause it? radiation?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:09 PM   #127
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how did he cause it? radiation?
D00d! I'm getting creative!

Yes. A teeny-tiny amount of poison was dropped into a water tower! And he's all like...

Sasha- Hah! Retards.
People- Eww. Poison is BAD and WRONG.
Milla- OMG. WTF happened?
Police- You know... super-villain.
Milla- ...Riddler?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:27 PM   #128
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What's the word for when your full of your self?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:29 PM   #129
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What's the word for when your full of your self?
Hm.

Stuck-up.
Arrogant.
Over-confident.

Those good? Or even...

Narciccistic. Or something.


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:31 PM   #130
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Old 10-20-2005, 08:42 PM   #131
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WOOO, Squid broke 4000! Congrats squid, you just danced like an idiot jerk.
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Old 10-20-2005, 08:43 PM   #132
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WOOO, Squid broke 4000! Congrats squid, you just danced like an idiot jerk.
No. I'm actually crying like a sad, sad little girl.

Boooo.

Any more questions, shinzuku? ANY?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:50 PM   #133
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How many licks till you get to the center of the earth?
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Old 10-20-2005, 08:55 PM   #134
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How many licks till you get to the center of the earth?
Ha! Seashore faults will make sure there is always something covering the Earth.


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:58 PM   #135
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Dang, How about Boyd's wipped chocolaty fluffy center?
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Old 10-20-2005, 08:59 PM   #136
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Dang, How about Boyd's wipped chocolaty fluffy center?
...am I really obligated to answer this?


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Old 10-20-2005, 08:59 PM   #137
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Dang, How about Boyd's wipped chocolaty fluffy center?
...Ohgodmybrain.

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Old 10-20-2005, 09:01 PM   #138
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Boyd is really a giant humn molded muskateers bar. Mmmmmmm, Boyd Cooper.
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Old 10-20-2005, 09:01 PM   #139
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Darth. I only have to say it once--I shouldn't have to say it at all.

INNUENDO'D.


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Old 10-20-2005, 09:02 PM   #140
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I've ben innuendo'd?? Do I get a prize or somthing?
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Old 10-20-2005, 09:40 PM   #141
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Purplesquid, I typed it do you want me to pm you it in parts (It's saying that is to big to pm as a whole) or just send you a link?


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Old 10-20-2005, 09:44 PM   #142
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I'll just send you a link okay.


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:34 PM   #143
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Shinzuku, I've got something to tell you. Well, Sasha doesn't levitate (or at least, X Sasha does, though Sasha does it), and he seems to do it a lot in your first chapter. Mind if I edit it?


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:35 PM   #144
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Why not can't he fly? fine.... you can change it...


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:40 PM   #145
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Why not can't he fly? fine.... you can change it...
Well, he's capable of it, it just seems like a very flamboyant thing to do. His personality is quiet and reclusive, and it just doesn't seem to fit in.

Of course, neither do pink goggles, but those are just too awesome to give up. XD


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:47 PM   #146
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He flew in the game.


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:49 PM   #147
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He flew in the game.
I know, I said he was capable of it. He just doesn't seem like the type of guy to do it often. Or at least, he'll do it when it requires a dramatic entrance/leaving.

Sasha's such a drama queen.


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:50 PM   #148
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Sasha: like, o-m-g


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:54 PM   #149
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Sasha: like, o-m-g
Hoho.

Milla- Silence, knave.


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Old 10-20-2005, 10:56 PM   #150
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Sasha: of course, milady


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Old 10-21-2005, 03:13 PM   #151
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Milla-Your dam straight!!!
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Old 10-21-2005, 04:44 PM   #152
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I wrote the first bit of the first chapter for our Oleander Meets Loboto fic that Klia and I are working on. We don't have an asylum name yet. Suggestions?

The Unamed Fic

Oleander reached once again for the crumpled; coffee stained slip of paper, buried deep within his pockets. He had looked over it a million times but his gloved hand held it once more just to see if he had read it right. It was a letter with infuriatingly small type, but it was readable and if he squinted hard enough he was able to make out the message.


Dear Morceau Oleander,

___ ___ home for the mentally deranged asks for your services. We have come to understand that you specialize in the field of psychological studies. ___ ___ only asks for your services due to a slight patient overflow. Said patient has been restrained and undergone many theraputic sessions but it is felt that someone of your ability is needed.

We are sure a man such as you must have a full schedule but we would greatly appreciate it if you would contact us as soon as possible and set up an appointment.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,
____ ___
________

Oleander smirked when he read the line ďA man such as you must have a full scheduleÖĒ Of course he didnít. In fact he hadnít been hired for months and was barely making by, and the money made from the summer camp was drying up quickly. The world just didnít need Psychonauts anymore. The world had moved on and he had not.



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Old 10-21-2005, 04:57 PM   #153
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Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason.
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Old 10-21-2005, 05:05 PM   #154
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Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason.
Here's one for a project I started but never finished (no spriters), its a pretty good asylum name, Scalper Asylum.


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Old 10-21-2005, 05:06 PM   #155
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Well, I can't think of any asylum names, but I think it's an awesome start. I particularly love that last line, for some reason.
Aww thank you. I literally spent three minutes on it as the story was just a small idea. But Klia is going to write the next part otherwise I would have dropped this.

Now to point out all the things wrong with it:

1. I'm sure I've heard that last line somewhere. Its probably a cliche or something, I just can't remember where.
2. I have absolutly no creativity. I STILL can't come up with a name for this asylum.
3. There isnt much known about the avalibility and reknown of Psychonauts so whatever I say is probably wrong or a continuatiy error. Because if Psychonauts weren't needed, why would there be so many? Why would so many parents send thier kids to a summer class if it proved to be so useless? Why would Sasha and Milla be widely known?

So many questions. And unfortunatly I can't answer a single one of them. D@mn me and my analyticial ways.



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Old 10-21-2005, 05:08 PM   #156
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Yes. Datmn you~!

What about Sparkly Home? It sounds pretty. :3


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Scalper. I really like that. I'll go over it with Klia though.



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Old 10-21-2005, 05:11 PM   #158
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What about Sparkly Home? It sounds pretty. :3
Uhh...Scalper is fine.
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Wait...I like Sparkly.



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Scalper. I really like that. I'll go over it with Klia though.
Thanks, I had to come up with a buncha names for new cities, places, and a new asylum, all the names SUCKED except for that one. Feel free to use it.


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