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Old 11-22-2005, 12:13 AM   #41
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Bac Rueben was relieved yet disappointed to lose nearly all of his men. But it was either a few or all. So he walked back to the rubble to find nething left. They first thing he saw when he got back was a tower, Still standing, but in critical condition.
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Old 11-22-2005, 01:32 AM   #42
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Dyce had 4 following cover troops as he entered the inner rim. He looked around for any sign of the crimson of the new civic garb. Dyce was glad he was not yet up to date, or he could have had his head sliced off by the powerful jedi lightsabers.

The earth slowly began to vibrate and a low pitch rising higher and higher, a large door of some kind being opened. Dyce instinctively ducked and quick movement behind him caught his eye. Several starfighters of an incredible model were erupting from the keep, most were already damaged. Apparently they had barely enough time to escape before some kind of civic fleet tore them apart. Lasers flared and another starfighter zoomed into Dyce's field of sight. It immediately began to gun down it's fellow replicas. He quickly analyzed that the civic fleet were now docking the ships to pursue the Jedi. But no more emerged. Maybe they ran out of ships? Back on their feet Dyce's group began to survey the walls and possible escape routs for the Jedi. No easy solutions. He had no idea how to get any more sufficient exits with portable artillery.

"Let's see if we can get into the keep's chronospheric controls. You all have engineer training, correct?" All nodded. "Great..." Dyce looked back out at the field just to make sure he was making a correct choice. He then dashed into the keep, his garb trailing behind him. They eventually reached a narrow hallway where filled with enemy troops. They were firing on a few jedi trapped and leaft to fight their way out. Dyce wipped out his spread blaster, charged, and fired. Layers of crimson armor fell before him. The few remaining troops were taken into open fire among his "engineers". They brushed past the bewildered Jedi, searching for a luminated control center of some sort. The vision soon was set before him, the troops removed the end grip of their guns to reveal many hacking tools. Dyce watched them go through tons of programs, most of them were already into correct function be previous engineers. "Report, sir," said the nearest of the four. "The Jedi are guarding the main upper hideout where the younger jedi are being safeguarded. We have to find a way to lead them out without getting them all killed." Dyce nodded at every word. He thought for about a minute. "Not going to happen. Probably why they didn't rush them out in the first place. They're defenceless! The only way out of this one is...to destroy the entire Civic Army." "But sir that's-" "Now that Eptima's here I will do anything in my power to stop them. And that should be enough."



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Old 11-22-2005, 09:04 AM   #43
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Scur walked out of the brdige and into the hallway. Nothing was in the hallway so they quickly headed down the hallway.Once he made it to the hallway, Scur sensed something, strong in the force, beyond the hangar door.
He decided to wait and see who.


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Old 11-22-2005, 08:59 PM   #44
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Dyce wandered the halls of the Jedi Keep. He was looking for anything that needed dealing with, could allow the Jedi to escape, or a safe way out for himself so he could return to the battlefield. He didn't have to use his spread blaster much, the jedi had made sure that no Civic Imperial who got in the keep would stay there. Dyce finally reached the starfighter dock, but all that he saw was torn wings, overheated thrusters and tons more unidentified parts. The cieling was identical to the previous floor, so maybe there was another dock above him. The only doors that lead up to there were locked with metal lapbars. Dyce flipped out his heat knife and began to gradually melt each bar. He then kicked the door as hard as he could and it began to cave in. It took him a while, but finally he managed to break down the door. He hurried upstairs and picked out the best-conditioned of the 3 starfighters. He went through a brief systems check, opened the takeoff gate, booted up the thusters and took off. He shot a few rounds at the opposing army, and remembered the GIs. Just as he was about to go beyond the canyon and look for them, the first commanding officer of Eptima's army stepped out from behind the plateau. No enemies around. Dyce grinned. They were prepared for an assault, the turn of the battle could be at hand.

Before he could react, he was thrown forward and he saw red on all monitors. He had been hit by a plasma beam, one that only matched that of a grand starfighter. He felt it getting hotter, he was hit badly. The engines were gone. He was going down, beyond the monitor screen was the soil of Niaj Qad...his doom. He frantically looked around for a parachute exit located in all of the civic starfighters. There was none. Appearently, the Jedi used the force to help them land safely. But Dyce was not a Jedi. Right before the fighter crashed Dyce thrusted himself out of the cockpit. Then the flames reached the combustable parts and the starfighter exploded, rocketing him even higher into the air. He fell for what seemed like an hour, and then he landed on his back. It was like being electricuted at high voltage. Dyce stuggled to stay conscious. He was lying out on the edge of the battlefield, his troops on the other side. Falling unconscious was like dying, he would be killed eventually. He began to stand, but then shook uncontrolably and fell over onto the ground. The sky turned darker until he was unconscious entirely.


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Old 11-23-2005, 12:47 AM   #45
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Bac Rueben saw starfighters crash land nearby. He went over to see if they still lived and found his old bud, Dyce. Bac couldn't believe it. Dyce was respected by nearly the whole army only to stab it in the back. Bac pulled out his gun and almost fired, but he suddenly felt pity for the shaking body on the ground. When he was sure he was unconscious, he ordered his troops to take him and set him on the ground outside the battlefield. A few of his troops picked him up and ran him off. When his troops returned, They went back to the keep.
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Old 11-23-2005, 03:58 AM   #46
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(im going to make this all dramatic and corney)

The lights in the hallway were Scur stood flickered and died. There was only one left, a dmily lit flickering light by the door. The door slid open and a man all in black entered. The part of his face not covered by his black hood was almost hidden by shadow but the lighting kepy flickering over his cold dark face. His eyes glared at Scur he withdrew his lightsaber and ignited it
"Jedi..." he whispered
"...Your time is up"
He walked towards scur slowly. He meant to kill the jedi....the jedi he had lost faith in....


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Old 11-23-2005, 04:02 PM   #47
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((Sorry, but I don't get it. Did your character die or is the duel starting?))


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Old 11-23-2005, 06:08 PM   #48
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My character is about to engage your in combat. My character is not dead he has turned evil and lost all faith in the jedi order


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Old 11-24-2005, 11:05 AM   #49
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((Ahhh I see, Ok then, Well I'll start then since you haven't yet))

Scur waved the other jedi off, not to interfere. "You can still turn to the lightside, don't give in to the hatred and anger, young one. You have much to learn." Scur stood watching the angered jedi slowly walk towards him.

((Your a Jedi Knight. Since I am the Consular II I should have the advantage. I think I should like injure you instead of killing you, like Obi-wan did to Anakin on Mustafar. Your choice!))


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Old 11-24-2005, 01:01 PM   #50
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(ok cool. And like on Mustafar with Anakin and Obi Wan, Zions power has increased greatly and he uses his anger as a weapon)

Zion laughed
"Lightside? That's pathetic, all the jedi want is power. They think they can police the galaxy but they can't. Their is no good or evil, there is only power and those too weak to seak it"
Zion smiled
"I should warn you jedi I am a lot stronger than I was before. Counceller or not you are no match for a si-"
He stopped, his red blade almost touching Scur.
He glared at him and aimed a slash at the jedi....


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Old 11-25-2005, 12:54 AM   #51
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Scur quickly reacts with a force push to the unsuspecting jedi, making him skid back a couple feet but till standing. The angered Jedi stood up straight and then charged at Scur, jumping before him He swung as hard as he could at Scur's head. Scur blocked the swing and skidded back about a foot still holding his saber from touching him. "He has much anger" Scur thought as he pushed the jedi away from him. Scur decided to only defend, to make sure he made no mistakes. Zion started a fury of saber swings at Scur as he blocked every swing, making it look easy. Zion backed off for a few seconds.


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Old 11-25-2005, 05:31 PM   #52
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Zion turned fast and relentlessly attackd Scur not caring what happened. His blade might not connect with him but Zion wanted to scare Scur. His power was increased beyond what Scur could imagine. He hadn't even begun to show off his power. Zion smiled
"You think this is it? You think this is all I have? My anger hasn't even started yet!"
Zion struck at the walls. He connected with a control pannel and a door slid bewtween the two fighters, Zion smiled. The light flcikered and died. The corridoor was now in complete darkness. Zion moved silently. His plan was simple. To kill Scur in anyway possible....


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Old 11-26-2005, 01:40 AM   #53
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(oooo fnice fight u 2 i want to see more now lol)
zaran was saddened by his oppenents lack of loyalty. he had sacrificed his own men to try to kill him. it didnt matter now the man had dissapeared. so he decided to head back to the keep to help defend them. when he got there he saw 14 soldiers trying to break into the keep. he threw his light saber killing 9 of them. the other 5 opened fire but were killed when the light saber came back.

(you didnt think it was over did you?)


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

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Old 11-26-2005, 02:36 PM   #54
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Zion sneaked back into the hanger. He saw the droids repeairing the ship. He destoyed the droids and damaged the ships beyond repair.He took a deep breat and held onto a metal pole. He threw his saber at the rayshield generator and it exploded. The ray shield went down and the contents of the ship was sucked into space. Zion managed to use the force to get his saber back. He waited, sure enough a metal sheet slid across where the ray shield had been. The ships were now floating uselessly in space. Zion smiled. He walked in total darkness into a deserted corridoor. He sensed Scur and he smiled. The Jedi was worried. Zion laughed quietly and said in a horse whisper
"Im coming for you....."
His cloak billowed in a non existant breeze and he searched on....


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Old 11-26-2005, 05:49 PM   #55
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As Scur felt the jedis starfighters were damaged and in space, he quickly spoke to the awaiting jedi. "All of you go to the Bridge and take control of it. Don't destroy the bombs, whatever you do. Also once you have control send it down to the planet to land not crash. Got it? Go!" The jedi started off towards the bridge and disappeared behind a corner.

Scur turned back around and looked around for Zion, in the darkness.


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Old 11-26-2005, 06:17 PM   #56
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"ok you 3 take those tables and put them in the hall way. you take the other tables and blockade the door once the others get back." ordered zaran
"also let us know when you break threw the firewall. we need that code to get to the secret hangar."
"sir, look at the secruity screens. that guy is comming back"
"ill hold him off. you keep working. you 3 come with me."


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

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Old 11-27-2005, 07:12 AM   #57
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Zion felt the ship start to move. He concentrated...he could see the outside of the ship....it was heading towards the planet. So Scur thought he could lead him into more Jedi? No matter he would kill them too. Zion smiled and waited for Scur to find him or the ship to land whichever came first....


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Old 11-27-2005, 12:09 PM   #58
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Scur felt a presence behind him, he quickly snapped his head in the direction and seen something moving. He walked over and noticed Zion started jumping out at him as both men ignited their sabers.

Scur blocked the hit as he slowly walked backwards. Zion took a couple of swings at Scur as he blocked them. ((Once Scur thought he had a chance of hitting Zion.....((Hey Jediofdoom, I was wondering maybe we could be like stunned by some Civic survivors. Want to?))


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Old 11-27-2005, 06:19 PM   #59
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Ok thats cool. In future can you not control my character please. It's not that you're doing anything bad but theres a certain way I want Zion to be portrayed. Cheers. I'll post later when I have some time.


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Old 11-27-2005, 09:58 PM   #60
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Bac Rueben looked up to notice that the jedi were back ( dang ). Bac Rueben stealthily moved behind a destroyed vehicle to survey the scene. It didn't look pretty. They were preparing to defend. Bac knew he didn't have enough men so he did what he felt was best. Save his men and surrender. He built a flag of white and tied it to a metal pole and waved it.
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Old 11-27-2005, 11:20 PM   #61
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(lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
as they tied the flag to the poll zaran came up behind them and activated his saber. and put it right to the neck of their leader.
"surrender of die."


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

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Old 11-28-2005, 06:35 PM   #62
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" We surrender!" proclaimed Bac Rueben. He was finished fighting the jedi and the rebels. Not like he was getting much help from the other commanders anyway.
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Old 11-28-2005, 07:15 PM   #63
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zaran thought about this for a moment. and a thought came to his mind. if he let this soldier go it would only prove to the rest of them that the jedi were not plotting to take over or anything of the sort.
"you are free to go"


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

"judge not, lest ye be judged"

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Old 11-28-2005, 07:31 PM   #64
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Bac Rueben was surprised. He knew the jedi would probably let them live but he didn't think they were that kind. Still, he was suspicious. Could this be a trick the jedi are using to get us on there good side? He didn't know. He did; however, accept to their kindness and left to fight the rebels and recieve reinforcements.
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Old 11-28-2005, 08:15 PM   #65
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The Civic Empire launched their secret grand frigate's giant missile salvo, destroying the main upper hideout. As soon as the Civ Imps saw a good clean opening it was open-fire on all of the jedi. Only 3 survived. All of the RIG fighters went kamakazee into the remains and victory was claimed. So end the first jedi council and the Niaj Qad Keep. Thanks for playing!


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Old 11-28-2005, 08:22 PM   #66
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Just kidding. Man I'm bored.

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"surrender of die."


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Old 11-28-2005, 11:12 PM   #67
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maby now we will have a chance to make the soldiers realize that the jedi were not a threat. but if he returned and attacked zaran would have to kill him. he had shown his enemy mercy. and if his enemy showed that he did not want mercy by returning as an enemy still then he will not recieve mercy.


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

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Old 11-29-2005, 02:43 PM   #68
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Zion sat in the darkness. Listening and sensing his surroundings. He knew the ship would touch down soon and he would encounter many angered Jedi. No matter her knew how to fight. He took out his second lightsaber. He focused on them and in a flash of light he combined them into a double bladed lightsaber. he switched it off. And stood up. The ship was in the atmosphere and was close to it's destination. Zion walked into the hanger and released the blast shield. In a rush of freezing air most of the things in the hanger were sucked out. Zion held onto a pole and watched as the ground came nearer. When he was sure he could survive the jump he ran and flung himself out of the hanger and falled. He hit the ground but using the force he did not receive damage. Where his fist had landed a creater had apeared around him. His black hood came down and revealed his now scared face. He smiled and made his way to what was left of the keep...


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Old 11-29-2005, 07:21 PM   #69
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Soon Scur could feel the capitol ship stop moving and he assumed it had landed. "Lower the main ramp and take control of the remaining vehicles inside of it. We'll try to disquise ourselves into the Civic Army." commanded Scur as he started to the main garage inside the ship.


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General Rasco advanced upon the small fleet, a white flag in the midst of them. It only twisted his unreadable lips into an angry smirk. As he approached, he caused several privates to back up in fear. One took a small step forward.
"G-Generral Rasko. I...I think we should surrender. Think of what we’re doing-"
"We are in the red. There is no need of surrendering."
"Our morals, what do we gain from this!? Stop this battle at once!"
"Follow orders. Just kill, do not ask questions."
"I refuse to abide by this tyranny! If the Jedi are not evil, then the empire must be!"
General Rasco shot the trooper directly in the heart. He fell to his knees, swearing. Rasco's face changed to a crazed grin.
"So let us be evil. Hatred brings power, and power is the ultimate moral. I serve a higher authority than myself.
Rasco pointed his blaster at their commander, Bac Rueben.
"If you will not turn, you will die."
He turned to his backup.
"Kill them."

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Civic War Admin Maas Corva ran down the short hall to two guards in crimson uniforms, guarding a door with two electric spears. Maas tried to walk up to the door as if the guards weren't there, but their spears overlapped without moving any other muscle.
"Access to the emperor is str-"
Maas made a wide kick and the two guards were thrown on the solid black floor. He put his Admin key into the slot and the door slid open. He walked in. The Emperor's chair was empty, the only person in the room besides himself was a dark robed man looking out the window as if he was deaf.
"I must see the Emperor immediately. Where is he?"
The man slowly turned to him, his yellow eyes locking onto Maas's. "What is it you want to speak to him about?"
"It's about the Niaj Qad order. I must speak to him now it's very urgent."
"Ahh, the Niaj Qad order. Yes, what is it?"
"It's for the Emperor to he-"
"Why Admin Corva, do you not recognize your dear Emperor?"
Maas's expression changed from urgent to a rage.
"WHAT?! What have you done to the Emperor?!"
The man merely cackled.
"Funny, you're the first to realize he's gone. I have disposed of him and taken over the Empire myself."
Maas withdrew his blaster from it's holster.
"Who are you?!"
"Rures Sith. Pleasure to meat you."
Maas pointed his blaster at Rures.
"Calm down boy, that blaster will be of no use to you," smirked the fiend. As if an invisible hand had grabbed Maas's blaster, it jerked out of his hands and into Rure's.
"Why are you doing this? How do you know the force?!"
"So many questions. There is little point in telling you, you won't be alive much longer." He grinned. "Do you know what power is? Surely you do, you are a War Admin I see. I know the force because I am a Jedi, obviously. After becoming a master I decided to go on an exploration for a grater power. My own master told me I was selfish to want power greater than the force was intended, and that he refused to let me leave. He told me I was needed at the council and I would have to live in the way the force had chosen. Without even going on an expedition, I found it. A power so great that I was able to kill my master, one who I had loved for so many years. This love-conquering power was called hatred. With hatred and the force, I was able to influence the galaxy under my control. I attacked the Jedi Keep to secure my position and have no other force-using competition. Hatred is powering the troops down on Niaj Qad, keeping them under my control. I have even persuaded a Jedi Master to the dark side."
Rures's roguish smile retained undiminishingly throughout the story. Maas practically exploded.
"You...you killed my emperor?!?!"
He pulled out a heat dagger and jumped at Rures. Rures shot Maas with his own blaster, no effort involved.
"Yes, young Maas, the old empire is dead, and the new empire...is mine!"


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Old 11-30-2005, 12:53 AM   #71
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(wow) (you do realize you cant kill all of the jedi right?)


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

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Old 11-30-2005, 08:49 AM   #72
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:07 PM   #73
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Zion ran until he could see the jedi fort. He showed no evidence of slowing down or no effort not to be seen. He wanted the Jedi to see the one who had killed so many of them. Zion was looking forward to fighting the others. he gripped his double bladed saber and leapt over the ruins of a speeder. He saw a white flag in the distance and a commande yelling orders out. Perfect he would be the first martyr. But then Zion sensed Jedi.....He stopped. He saw some of the advance. Perfect. He ran forward and jumped. Whilst in the air he ignited his double bladed saber. He hit the floor on one knee and took out two of the Jedi's legs. He then jumped and kicked one over. He swung his blade around and sliced off a Jedi's arm. One of the jedi without a lower leg was on all fours panting and moaning. Zion kicked him in the side. He flew a few feet in the air and rolled. He landed in a bleeding heep. Zion pointed the blade at the mans throat.
"Zion....what are you....doing?" He panted
"Taking revenge on the Jedi for what they have done" Zion said violently
"Now tell me who is in charge?"
"Like im going to tell you"
Zion moved the blade closer to the mans throat
"Tell me and I shall make your death quick and painless"
Zion moved his blade over the mans chest. He screamed in pain. The blade cut into his skin and left a deep trail of blood.
Zion focused...
"Zaran? Your thoughts betray you"
"..No...."
Zion left the man the bleed to death as he looked for this Jedi....


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Old 12-02-2005, 11:20 AM   #74
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Dyce woke up to a crash. A civic grand starfighter had crashed not 200 feet from where he was. The big problem was he didn't know where was "here". He was off the battlefield, and alive. In fact from where he was, he couldn't see anything, didn't know which direction to go. He looked higher to see if he could spot the peak of the keep. He saw a large cliff in the distance, was the keep located near a cliff? If it wasn't, he could always climb it so he could spot the keep. Then a AO-OT flew right over his head, landing on it's side. Okay. Dyce began to walk slowly toward the battlefield. More vehicles flew past, one by one. "Okay...that's...kind of weird...," Dyce mumbled to himself. They were all in good condition. As soon as he reached the peak of the hill, he realized that he was behind a Civic assembly area the whole time. I Jedi was in the goup as well, a very experienced Jedi. He was blocking with his two lightsabers while slicing through anything and everything. He was also throwing unmanned vehicles at the crowd, which was actually fairly effective. Dyce decided to go around the assembly. Unfortunately, he was spotted.
"He's one of Eptima's troops! Get him!" Dyce found he had about five Imerials chasing after him. It would have been pretty funny, if they wouldn't have been shooting at him. Dyce decided to lead them to his infantry...wherever they were. He finally saw the Keep. And the battle. There were so many blasters firing, Dyce thought he would go blind. Since his troops were preoccupied he turned around and shot the Imps himself with his spread blaster. This was getting pretty intense.


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Old 12-02-2005, 05:28 PM   #75
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Zion walked slowly towards the keep. Laser fire was being directed at him but he deflected it back with his duel lightsaber. He jumped onto the wall. A sniper turned around just in time to see Zion's foot connect with his head. The sniper fell to the floor below. Some troops looked up
"Jedi scum!"
Zion jumped down and sliced their heads off. The others watched in shock and amazment
"Kill him!" one of them screamed
Zion blocked back the blasts easily and then sliced through one and then another when he got to the last one he kicked him over
"Please..." he said
"I...I thought Jedi were supposed to be mercyful!"
Zion smiled
"I am no Jedi"
He then stabbed the man through the chest and his head hit the floor
Zion stood up and turned his saber off he looked around the remaining soliders stood frozen in fear. Zion stamped the floor and the troops fell over, they got to their feet and ran at Zion. He ignited his saber and spun around so fast he was hardly visible. The apporaching soliders were sliced into bits as Zion spun. He stopped suddenly. The group of mutilated soldiers were all moaning and screaming. He smiled and left them to bleed until their deaths. He entered the main chamber and continued his search for this jedi named Zaran.....


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Old 12-02-2005, 06:16 PM   #76
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Scur climbed into a tank looking thing(Piercer). He manned a machine gun and watched as another two jedi climbed in and took control of the controls and the other manned the machine gun on the other side of the piercer. The tank drove off the ramp and he waited for a little until in the middle of the battle. He aimed at some fighters in the air and fired at the engine, destroying it and sending it down into the Civic army's men, smashing them.

The Civic men noticed that the tank wasn't for them and they started throwing grenades at it even though their men were right next to it. The Piercers with the other jedi started firing at the men and starfighters around them, like a portion of the army just rebeled and started attacking everyone in the middle of the field. Men were flying everywhere and fighters would be shot down trying to penetrate the piercers defenses. Scur noticed a tank start turning towards his so he aimed and shot right into the cockpit window killing the driver. Scur aimed back at the soldiers and fired at them. He knock many down tring to get near the tank to climb into it to kill Scur and the other two jedi.

The Civic Army did not know that it was the jedi until a piercer was invaded and were sliced as they opened the door on the roof. The jedi jumped out and started killing everyone around them. Scur tried shooting off the men from the piercer and away from the piercer. "Get back in before you die. I will shoot them away from the tank." Scur said to the jedi slicing the soldiers on top of the tank, while blocking blasts from everywhere.


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(hmmm well you wont kill me easily i promise you that.)
"master zaran!!"
"yes?"
"we have terrible news!!!!"
"what is it?"
"one of the jedi who was in the hanger has told us one of our jedi has turned into a sith!"
"what?!?!? where is he now?"
"we believe hes searching you you."
"dam get the young ones to the secret room in this chamber. its behing that screen."
"we will healp you sir."
"you cant. you are not as powerful as i. you must defend the young ones if i fail."
"also contact master scur"
"yes sir."
"tell him there is a new sith"


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

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(hmmm well you wont kill me easily i promise you that.)
"master zaran!!"
"yes?"
"we have terrible news!!!!"
"what is it?"
"one of the jedi who was in the hanger has told us one of our jedi has turned into a sith!"
"what?!?!? where is he now?"
"we believe hes searching you you."
"dam get the young ones to the secret room in this chamber. its behing that screen."
"we will healp you sir."
"you cant. you are not as powerful as i. you must defend the young ones if i fail."
"also contact master scur"
"yes sir."
"tell him there is a new sith"


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

"judge not, lest ye be judged"

"an act is not a true act of kindness unless the person preforming the act is doing so with out expecting so much as a second thought or thank you from the other person. " - me
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Old 12-04-2005, 05:31 PM   #79
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(Excellent I love a challenge. Lol. but seriously I know I can't kill you cus thats char controling, and we don't want that)

Zion continued his search for this master Zaran
He sensed an unusual amount of fear close to him. He sensed Jedi.
He walked into the chamber where Zaran stood alone.
"It's good to finally meet you Master Zaran" Zion said giving a short bow
He gripped his saber
"You must know why I'm here...I'm here to kill the remainder of the jedi"
Zion looked around
"You may ask yourself why I have turned against the Jedi...well I won't bore you with the details but I will tell you the Jedi have been weak for decades. They think they can police the galaxy when it Dosn't wan't policing...thus what you see outside"
Zion turned to look outside and watch the battle
"You see what You've done? many innocent people will die becasue of you. You may think I'm evil but im really not"
Zion turned back to Zaran
"But enough chit-chat...lets get down to buisness"
Zion ignited his double bladed lightsaber
"Once I've disposed of you I'll kill the young ones and the others behind that screan there"
Zion smiled and walked towards Zaran slowly raising his balde as he went....


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Old 12-04-2005, 09:12 PM   #80
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(LOL this will be interesting) (oh btw you have my permission to kinda control my char during a fight so long as he dont lose all of his limbs, losing important limbs, oh and death.)
"well answer me this. why do you want to kill the young ones? they have nothing to do with this war. anything that has been done to upset others was done by the older ones. it is apperent you still have much to learn"


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

geeks are not afriad of hell. we know how to get around the fire wall.

"judge not, lest ye be judged"

"an act is not a true act of kindness unless the person preforming the act is doing so with out expecting so much as a second thought or thank you from the other person. " - me
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