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Old 12-27-2005, 01:12 PM   #81
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I don't think I actually have a job here, Hallucination. I'm just the critic for Starwarsknight.com. Unless they make me a staff member, I don't work here.


'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

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Old 12-27-2005, 01:51 PM   #82
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^Its more of a job than being an ordinary member, so to me you'll be a staff member. Maybe an admin will put 'Status: Critic' under your avatar. (I doubt it, but they are getting nicer around here)


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Old 12-29-2005, 10:56 AM   #83
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i think you need a special staff post that says 'critic' for that. since all we have are mods, Smods and Admins, it no workie


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Old 12-30-2005, 11:20 AM   #84
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Sorry I am a little late delivering the goods. Between Christmas, My anniversary (Which I remember and my wife forgets, go figure) and prepping for New Years, I have had a full dance card.
But you guys make it worth while.

Okay First Fanfic (Untitled first attempt)
Darth Beowulf
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157073
A young boy has his first experience with the Force and the Dark side.
The work is good kid. Another one of those simple fixes. Edit and spell-check.

The Battle of the Dark Lords
Theoneman
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=156508
Malak Versus Revan in their final battle.
Except for spelling and editing problems, this is excellent! The scene is clear and moves well. Keep up the good work.

Luke Skywalker vs. Jacen Solo
Theoneman
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157340
The climactic battle scene of Luke Skywalker versus Jacen Solo.
Quality work again. My only question is why didnít you finish the fic?


Knight Trials
Zane Marit
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=5278
Obi Wan struggles with the loss of Anakin Skywalker.
Departing from the series a little, but excellent work.

Trial Under The Suns
Kopernikuz
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=3330
A padawan wanting a challenge gets more than her bargained for.
While the writing style is good, he fails to hold my interest because he obviously doesnít know enough about ship to ship combat. While a pirate in an armed merchant vessel can and sometimes does take on and defeat a warship, it is unlikely that the merchant would be more heavily armed and armored than anything but a smaller warship.

A Killer Among Us
Kopernikuz
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=3148
A down and out Jedi canít resist the call of a mystery.
Make the Jedi the equivalent of the FBI. Take a typical Private investigator story with the PI an ex Jedi. Toss in a murder and the burning need to investigate, and you have this story categorized.
Itís very well written, and deserves a look.

Kotorfanmedia

Knights of the Republic III: Force of Echos
WebMistressGina
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=533
Revan is getting together a few good people...
The style is well done, the story easy and fun to read. The readers on Kotorfanmedia gave it twelve thumbs up. It deserved them.

Amplexus,
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http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=534
After the Star Forge, Revan tries to come to grips with her life again.
The writing style is smooth and the angst of the main character well considered and revealed.

Lost and Found
Rose07
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=566
Sequel to ĎFutureís EndĒ and ĒSlow DissolveĒ
I canít say enough good things about her work.


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Old 12-30-2005, 12:22 PM   #85
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happy anniversary, Mach. and great work once again.


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Old 12-30-2005, 07:53 PM   #86
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Happy anniversary . Great reviews, but I'm beginning to think
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Old 12-30-2005, 08:56 PM   #88
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Happy anniversary. I hope you had a good one.
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Happy Anniversary, Merry Christmas (late, i know) and a Happy (and hopefully less critical) New Year!!!

To machie, BTW.


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Sabretooth, ask my wife. I'm ALWAYS critical.


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Old 01-06-2006, 11:30 AM   #91
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Just an aside; Did you know that this column has gotten more views in this forum than all of my posted fiction combined?
Now I'm depressed.

Darth Sion: A legacy of Pain.
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157206
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A Sith master remembers his rise to power
For a first attempt it is very good. The story is compelling the characters well defined and only needs editing to make it work perfectly.

Sith or Jedi... Illusions.
Jamijaster
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157574

A young Jedi is exiled.
You pretty much said yourself everything critical about this piece that I could have. I have always said a good story is rewritten, and that is merely a quote from Arthur Clark.
Calm down, think of what you want to say. Visualize and begin. Remember that quotation marks are used to differentiate between who is speaking as are paragraph breaks.
Now try again.


The Adventures of John Skywalker
John Skywalker
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=153678
The Twin Brother of Anakin Skywalker is found and trained by the Sith.
I have critiqued some of Johnís work before, and he has the same problems but they are, as I said then, merely technical. He needs to remember to have paragraph breaks, watch when he has people speaking and check his punctuation.
Overall very good.


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Mara Jade Luke's Demise
dbzmaster
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=5407

Set during the Vong War. After the death of Luke Skywalker, a 2026 year old Jedi falls in love with Mara Jade.
He jumps back and forth between present and past tense, and his scenes while compelling feel merely slapped together rather than conceived. The premise of the ancient warrior returning to save the day is a bit hackneyed, but like any idea, it comes back.
While the style is bothersome to me, the story is not to badly done.

Tales Of A Coruscant Cabby, The Isamu Starkiller Story
Isamu Starkiller
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=4738
A night on Coruscant through the eyes of a world weary cab driver.

A story where some people have inserted their own sections, the writing is reminiscent of the Harry Canyon segment of the Heavy Metal Movie, or the movie Taxi driver. An interesting read.

Jedi Slave
Princess Tranquility
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=5938

Set a year after the Battle of Endor, Han Solo is sent on a diplomatic mission. But the planet is proslavery and he needs a slave so...

The writer was immediately worried at the end of chapter 1 that people would be upset that she would have not only slavery, but that two of the major characters would be involved. Knowing politics as I do, that didnít bother me in the slightest.
What did bother me is the idea suggested in the work that Uncle Owen was abusive to the point of beatings. Something I did not detect even when Anakin Skywalker was still a slave.
The style is good, and only needs tweaking.

From kotorfanmedia

Promise
Mellyna
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=574
Set during KOTOR II
A short scene between A female Revan and another unnamed woman.
It is only a short piece, barely a page long. But it immediately caught my interest. Mellyna has two more stories she has written, and I almost went up the chain to find them before going on.
However I am sticking to my methodology. Well done!

Destinyís Pawn:
Allronix
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=598

Set in KOTOR I right before the capture by Leviathan
This piece is outstanding. Going from the bawdy songs of a crew relaxing after Manaan, to the angst of someone who wonders what there is to life after the force, then to a scene heavy with romance, then to an attack
Itís like riding a roller-coaster.

Donít Think
Rose07
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=568
Set after Korriban in KOTOR I
Katrina (Revan) decides to push her relationship with Carth to the next level.
The same quality work she has done since I started this job. Very well done.


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Old 01-06-2006, 02:53 PM   #92
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yeah, no wonder youre the critic. (though youre not TOO critical)


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Old 01-12-2006, 06:41 PM   #93
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There, Triumph of the Republic is finished. And this time, say more about than simply "Continuation of story Rescue from Mustafar", ok?

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There, Triumph of the Republic is finished. And this time, i'd like to thank you for taking the time to first read my story and then write up a review.
fixed.


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Old 01-12-2006, 10:05 PM   #95
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fixed.
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Old 01-13-2006, 10:07 AM   #96
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Alkonium, If you have read the Lord of the Rings Trilogy, you know that Two towers is only a continuation of Fellowship of the ring. A sequel.
that is what I meant.
If an apology for my semantics is in order, I apologize.


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Old 01-13-2006, 10:11 AM   #97
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STAR WARS: Shadows Of The Past
BlackReflection
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157306

A Jedi needing to get his life straight is given an important mission

The biggest problem this little Dane has is that he is fumbling with English. Since all I know in Danish is nothing, I canít complain too much about that. He needs to edit and remember to finish his thoughts when he is writing.
The story is excellent and kept me going through that interminable prologue. Kid, it should have been at least five paragraphs.

STAR WARS: The Prophets of the Dark Side
Vain Naji-Mohr
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=157999

A Sith Lord tries to derail a prophecy.
While he has problems with spelling, the writing is clean and well done. The only problem is that there isnít much to it yet. Keep writing, kid!

Shadow of Destiny
Gray Master
http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=158172
A silent witness follows Revan through his travails after erasing his memory.

The secret outside observer is one of the least used gambits in fiction, and GM does it well up to the end of this first chapter. I liked what I read, and what I want is more.

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A Chance Meeting,
Zane Marit
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=5962
Luke meets Obi wan Kenobi for the first time when he is twelve.

The writing style needs some work because he tends to jump perspectives from third person present to third person past (The difference between saying Ďhe picked up the swordí to compared to Ďhe picks up the swordí) sometimes in one sentence. However Zane does excellent work.

A AU story. Untitled
Arica
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=6107
In an Alternate Universe, Anakin Skywalker deals with the mistreatment of his grand daughter.

Picture Anakin and Padme living happily every after...
That is the premise of this short vignette. The style is god, needing only editing, and as with a lot of you kids, my primary complaint is that you didnít do enough!

Smuggler Assault,
Rikh
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=6209

Set during the NJO, Smugglers set up to attack a force not realizing what they face.

The writing style is excellent, and the story well done. Rukh only has to edit the work to make it outstanding.

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Wounds of the Past
Phoq
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=583

Set on Kashyyyk after finding the Star Map.

Phoq has done some good work here. The style is a bit stilted, but that will improve with practice.


The Wayside
gan xinqba
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=595

Set in KOTOR II I believe. An intelligence agent and ex-Jedi apprentice investigates the suspiscious deaths of several Jedi masters.

Written in a journalistic style, the author leads you gently into the story with a bit about the main character, setting the scene and characters, and draws you into his created world. Very well done.

Revival
karacat
http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=591

Set during KOTOR. Enroute to Manaan after the fateful meeting withv Malak, our Heroine wonders what is and isnít real.

A writer should push the envelope of what is part of another personís universe but not so far that people are bothered by it. Karacat did a good job here, adding what she called a Ďforce bombí placed by the Jedi council to stop Revanís return. An intriguing idea.


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Ohhh reviews. Good to see some reviews, but I think your spelling is going down.


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Ah, reviews. I was expecting them to be highly-overly-critical, since it was Friday the 13th...


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Old 01-15-2006, 11:31 AM   #100
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Ohhh reviews. Good to see some reviews, but I think your spelling is going down.
Remember what I tell you guys about spelling checks and editing?

Mea maxima culpa


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Old 01-16-2006, 12:46 AM   #101
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how about you type it out in word and use the spell check things there and then you can copy paste it here. me do same thing with me fics. that reminds me. Mace Windu is done, can you pls review it in your next bunch? thx


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how about you type it out in word and use the spell check things there and then you can copy paste it here.
That's what we all do. Except one time, I typed a paragraph on this site.

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meh, spellcheck is for wimps. if you don't know how to spell it, look it up. then after you finish writing, proofread. trust me: it turns out much better that way.


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Who proofreads there work? I don't!! Really, I don't.

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hehe, well, another advantage of proofreading is catching bits and pieces of your writing that don't entirely make a lot of sense. not only is proofreading better than spellcheck, it also gives you a chance to edit your work and make it better. this is especially true if you take a break for an hour or so and come back to the same part you just wrote. a new perspective can sometimes prove to be a valuable addition to an already great work.


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I was slightly kidding. I do read over my work once (maybe twice if I'm feeling like reading) and it does help.

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If you actually read my segment Acceptance, you will notice that I rewrote the scene in the mess hall because the way I worded it originally, I suggested that she had to become a master of the force itself, rather than what I had meant, which is that some problems are easier to fix by paying attention to it, and dealing with it on a more mundane level.


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I still haven't figured out hyperlinking. The word processor in my computer refuses to accept that there is such a thing and sulks when I try to install it. My week was rather rushed with MLK day and my wife's tirade after getting her teeth fixed.
I promise, I'll try to do better.

Apprentice of Me
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A wounded Jedi returns to Telos. Set in KOTORII

Like a lot of you younger writers, EF is thinking and trying to write at the same speed. It doesnít work, people. The human mind is like the turbine of a jet or a modern automobile engine. To get it to run something like a ship or a car, you have to use what are called reduction gears, taking the several thousand revolutions of the engine and reducing it to something the wheels can take.
Edit the work, re-write it, and especially check the spelling. Donít try to write it as you see it, write it more carefully.
It was short, and the idea seemed good. Keep it up.

Star Wars: Knights Of The Old Republic: The Mandalorian Wars
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Set before KOTOR; as Revan tries to gain Jedi support, Admiral Saul Karath fights on.

Potsie, you havenít given me enough to really get into this story. But the idea is good. You tend to jump around a bit, but not as bad as some Iíve seen. Slow down a bit, expand the segments and have clean breaks between them. Keep it up.

Mace Windu: Jedi Master Reborn
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Set after Mace Windu fell

A good view of the scramble that would have occurred after order 66 was passed. The pacing is good, and every bad thing I can think about had already been said before I got to chapter 4. I wish I had time to got through it and read it all, RC, but I have a Ďstone knives and bearskiní landline.

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Jedi Insurrection
Darth_Badman
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=6055

Set 450 years before the formation of the Empire; what happens when politics controls the Jedi?

The story is well written, and is intriguing. The only question and complain I have is this;
Does our friend Darth Badman know what a Paragraph is?

Thoughts of One, Clone War Short Story
Obi-Wan
http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?showtopic=6552

The thoughts of a Dark Jedi before a mission
Obi-wan has been reviewed by me before, and his style has not changed. The story is clean and crisp, and deserves to be completed.

Star Wars: Vader's Disciple
Darth_Badman
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Three years before a New Hope; The thoughts of Vaderís apprentice

Everything I said above about this kid still stands. Once he learns what a spell-checker and paragraph are for heíll go far.

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What Dreams May Come
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Set in KOTOR; Revelations during the final battle may change Revan forever.

I had never seen the concept that Revan and Malak were siblings before. Just as I made them people who almost became lovers, wook made them brother and sister. An excellent concept, and excellent read.

RAMPAGE
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Set in KOTOR: A slight over reaction by a droid.
Everyone knows of the characters that merely pass through the story, mentioned, briefly interacted with, and then gone. Ghostie took one minor character, the droid from the tombs, and made a short story about it that is well worth reading.

Broken Images I
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Set after KOTOR I. A series of broken images put together in a story form.
Only two small vignettes, but such promise! Write more! Now!


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Old 01-20-2006, 01:27 PM   #109
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Star Wars: Knights Of The Old Republic: The Mandalorian Wars
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Set before KOTOR; as Revan tries to gain Jedi support, Admiral Saul Karath fights on.

Potsie, you havenít given me enough to really get into this story. But the idea is good. You tend to jump around a bit, but not as bad as some Iíve seen. Slow down a bit, expand the segments and have clean breaks between them. Keep it up.
Thanks for your comments machievelli (I admit I need to improve in explanation). I will mainly explain the events of the Mandalorian Wars in my main Fanfic, Jorran Corral - The Chronicles Of A Jedi. I am planning one more Chapter where this Fanfic will end. This I suppose this is my lead up into a better story.
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Old 01-20-2006, 01:47 PM   #110
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Mach, im not in a hurry, if you want, you can delete that bit and take your time to read my fic properly then make one. im ok with it. good work anyway.


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Old 01-21-2006, 03:37 PM   #111
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I like the idea of a critic, but through a feedback system. If someone pasted on the homepage a critique about my mods, I would be very pissed.

Quote from one of machievelli's reviews:
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A wounded Jedi returns to Telos. Set in KOTORII
Like a lot of you younger writers, EF is thinking and trying to write at the same speed. It doesnít work, people. The human mind is like the turbine of a jet or a modern automobile engine. To get it to run something like a ship or a car, you have to use what are called reduction gears, taking the several thousand revolutions of the engine and reducing it to something the wheels can take.
Edit the work, re-write it, and especially check the spelling. Donít try to write it as you see it, write it more carefully.
It was short, and the idea seemed good. Keep it up.
You encouraged him/her, and then you let everyone know his flaws... Now, I am a professional designer, and critiques are part of my everyday life. However, when I am doing something for fun, I get really ticked off if someone took the steam out of my buzz..

Another note:
I would only place a few critics up on the homepage at a time, for they are taking up too much space. LucasForums.com provides multiple levels of entertainment, and the critics are sometimes overwhelming.

Overall, I like your idea, but keep in mind that these people are just having fun. Give them professional feedback in their own threads. Let other people give feedback as well.

When it comes to the home page. Try to keep in mind that other news is just as important.

Keep up the work....
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Old 01-21-2006, 03:50 PM   #112
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meh, spellcheck is for wimps.
I guess I am a wimp then.
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Old 01-22-2006, 01:22 AM   #113
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Mac, I am doing as I was asked.
When I was younger, I had people who read my stuff but weren't willing to complain about it because 'hey, I'm your friend, and and I don't want to hurt your feelings'. When I briefly taught a class on creative writing, I constantly ran into minor problems (The one you quoted is a common one) and found it's best to tell them. It might hurt their feelings a little, but I am also trying to teach them lessons I learned a long time ago. I noticed his problem because I did the same thing until I learned better.

A critic is supposed to be 'critical', hence the name. However I defy you to find one criticism that was a knife in the guts like most critics who actually get paid for it.


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Mac, I am doing as I was asked.
When I was younger, I had people who read my stuff but weren't willing to complain about it because 'hey, I'm your friend, and and I don't want to hurt your feelings'. When I briefly taught a class on creative writing, I constantly ran into minor problems (The one you quoted is a common one) and found it's best to tell them. It might hurt their feelings a little, but I am also trying to teach them lessons I learned a long time ago. I noticed his problem because I did the same thing until I learned better.

A critic is supposed to be 'critical', hence the name. However I defy you to find one criticism that was a knife in the guts like most critics who actually get paid for it.
Truthfuly, I didn't want to respond to anything for today. However, I thought you desirved an answer...

For the past few days, I have been stressing out on small anoyances. Disregard my original post...



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Old 01-23-2006, 10:53 AM   #115
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Mac, if I had a week, I could post every nasty reply I sent just in the last year because I was tired. No biggie


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Old 01-23-2006, 04:11 PM   #116
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When I look on StarWarsKnights.com, I noticed you keep chaning the tittle. When the mods are reported, they use the same tittle: 'Weekly Mod Reports'.

Did you ever think of using a title that is consistant each time you report?

For example:

'Fan-Fiction Report: Critique!'
'The Fan-Fiction Critic!"



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Old 01-23-2006, 10:57 PM   #117
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When I look on StarWarsKnights.com, I noticed you keep chaning the tittle. When the mods are reported, they use the same tittle: 'Weekly Mod Reports'.

Did you ever think of using a title that is consistant each time you report?

For example:

'Fan-Fiction Report: Critique!'
'The Fan-Fiction Critic!"
Pfft. That's no fun. I personally like how he mixes it up Makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside I just hope that he gets around to reading mine J/king I know your busy. Keep up the reviews Mach

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I like it when titles change. I'm all for a little variety.

btw, Machievelli asked me to let you know that the reviews would be a little late this week as he has some problems with his computer.
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Old 01-27-2006, 06:49 AM   #119
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he should scrap it and buy the latest gizmos, man.
good work anyway. though i think youll like my fic better if you go through it fully, wont take much time.


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When I look on StarWarsKnights.com, I noticed you keep chaning the tittle. When the mods are reported, they use the same tittle: 'Weekly Mod Reports'.

Did you ever think of using a title that is consistant each time you report?

For example:

'Fan-Fiction Report: Critique!'
'The Fan-Fiction Critic!"
Yes I did actually. But I was in a seriously playful mood when I started. After all, someone thought I was good enough to be a critic! Besides, they have six movies and about sixty book so far, so I was getting into the swing of things.

Don't worry, I was thinking of settling down anyway.


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