Yet another Opening Crawl
It's that time again when I have to pull my finger out and run a Star Wars RPG campaign for my group. Last time I did an opening crawl, but this time round I decided to expand on the idea and actually include part of the first scene by adding some animation. I've pretty much done it, but I can't help feeling it could do with a few more finishing touches.
Sorry it's a bit small, but I'd love to hear any criticism and tips to make it look a little slicker...